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Uploaded by on Nov 10, 2011

I'm trying to write a song and it's not really working.

Lyrics:

I tuck my heart in suits of armor
It's just what I do to get by
In my mind you'd never harm her
But you were never on my side
You were never on mine

You mix the truth in to tell a lie
You create a world that's falsified
I could never live, I could never survive
On two truths and a lie

Chorus

Oh quickly I went blind
While I was trying to survive
On two truths and I lie

I always feel kinda bad inside
When I tell two truths and just one lie

Chorus

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  • I wouldn't say it is not working. Not bad at all. Do not give up. When I am wriing, I sometimes have to put it away and come back later. Some songs come fast. Some come slow. You are braver than me with putting original music on Youtube. I do not promote myself. I just do what I enjoy. Keep on writing.

    Thanx for the encouraging words on the Blueridge forum. I am known as Hogie there and on UMGF.

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