I Walk Alone {RE-EDIT}

Please watch this movie with volume up to experience all the sound effects that have been mixed into the footage.
I have re-edited the original. I feel this is a far better movie than the last. The poetry has changed in some areas. The sound effects are far greater. Over all I feel this movie is so much more artistic than the last one. I hope you enjoy

Category:

Film & Animation

Tags:

• short
• film
• experimental
• poetry
• effects
• voices
• hallucinations
• medication
• judgement
• psychotic

[SiR0001]

i loved the poem.

<3

the only thing that bugged me is that in one stanza it sais "their following me" or something like that. it should say "they're" or "they are"

i generally don't like being a grammar nazi, but as a poem i think that making it as effective as possible in communication your message is important.

overall, good work!

[ziggystarter]

lol, thanks for the correction, sadly once I upload these vids etc I can't edit them.

[tegrimm]

WOW! very eerie and quite a representation

[KashyaCharsi]

Aren't there any poems about schizotypal disorder? From first-hand experience if possible.

[SiR0001]

ohi looked back and the line was actually

"their never far behind"

but yeah it should be they're

<3

[dashpoet]

Excellent all round - the poem, the film, the sound track. Very effective 5*

[janeplainmcaine]

EEK! I turned the sound up as requested Ziggystarter!

[jamesread77o1]

I'm not sure what version of "I walk alone," I like the best. I think this just edges it. Nice one! 5*

[DavidRandallCurtis]

Awesome work... thanks for posting this as a vid response! 5*

[magictricks3]

Truly amazing!