I Walk Alone {RE-EDIT}
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This video is a response to HINDSIGHT (collaboration with ElviraDark6 & TheRavenofPoe)
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All Comments (10)
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WOW! very eerie and quite a representation
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Aren't there any poems about schizotypal disorder? From first-hand experience if possible.
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ohi looked back and the line was actually
"their never far behind"
but yeah it should be they're
<3
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Excellent all round - the poem, the film, the sound track. Very effective 5*
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EEK! I turned the sound up as requested Ziggystarter!
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I'm not sure what version of "I walk alone," I like the best. I think this just edges it. Nice one! 5*
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Awesome work... thanks for posting this as a vid response! 5*
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Truly amazing!
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i loved the poem.
<3
the only thing that bugged me is that in one stanza it sais "their following me" or something like that. it should say "they're" or "they are"
i generally don't like being a grammar nazi, but as a poem i think that making it as effective as possible in communication your message is important.
overall, good work!
SiR0001 3 years ago
lol, thanks for the correction, sadly once I upload these vids etc I can't edit them.
ziggystarter 3 years ago