Not Your Enemy {Nick Jonas Love Story} Chapter 13 "The Moment Passed" Des. Box

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Hey guys! :) Here is Chapter 13 even though I didn't get the 25 comments on the last chapter. Some people posted more than once and I only count 1 comment per person. So yea. That's why this one is kinda short. Well, Enjoy! :)
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He slowly opened his eyes and smiled.

"Hey beautiful." he said very calm and sweetly.

It felt like I was in an ocean at night and instead of following the light, I followed a sweet voice.

"Hey." I said as I continued touching his soft sweet face.

He smelled like Abercrombie aftershave.

"Come here." he said and signaled me to lay next to him.

I laid next to him and our faces where so close I could feel his warm breath on my lips.

"Nick." I whispered.

I wasn't calling him, it was like his name was a sweet remark of a song that made babies fall asleep.

"Yeah baby." he said with his eyes still closed.

I love how he called me baby or babe.

"Nothing, it's nothing." I said.

I pressed my body against his and he hugged me tighter. I wanted to stay like that forever. Unfortunately, we couldn't.

"We better wake up." Nick said.
"Yeah, we should." I said.

We both stood up and saw my sister still sleeping next to Joe and Kevin snoring slightly. I laughed a little and Nick hugged me from behind. I smiled and turned around, our faces inches away.

"Remember how I'm scared of everything?" I asked Nick.
"Yeah." he said looking at me.
"I think I'm ready to tell you the reason." I said.

But right then, Kevin and Joe woke up but Sara was still asleep. Joe just stared at my sister and smiled.

"She was the one playing with my hair, right?" Joe asked.

I nodded and smiled. Nick didn't talk. It seemed like he was in shock that I was going to tell him why I'm so scared. But I wasn't ready to tell Joe or Kevin.

"I'm going to go change." I said.

I went upstairs and took a shower. I got dressed and went outside. I walked up to Nick and took in his strong Abercrombie perfume.

"So are you ready to tell me?" he asked me.
"No. The moment passed." I said and started to walk away.
"Hey, wait!" he said and I turned around.
"I need to ask you something."
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  • How many more comments do you need? I'm dying to find out what happens next! Seriously!!! :D

  • I'm writting it right now! LOL!:)

    It'll be up in about 20-30 minutes! Okay?

  • Thanks!!! Sorry, I don't mean to be annoying, it's just that your story is amazing! :D

  • It's okay. But for some reason, I won't let me open WMM. I'm done writing but I'm trying to get it to open. UGH! I hate when this happens! It might take longer for me to post. I have to fix it first. :(

  • more plzz anyways dont u think 25 comment + ratings are alot??? BUT LOVE UR STORIESSS

  • Well, with 558 subscribers, I don't think it's alot. I'm not concerned about the ratings as much as the comments so when I get 25 comments (one comment per person), and like about 20 ratings, I'll post the next chapter. :) OK?

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  • omg swoon

  • the moment passed?!?!?!

    LMAO

    i think nick will ask her to be his gf =D

    i hope, they sound cute 2gether... =]

  • this is all so cute!

  • i bet he's gonna ask her to be his girlfriend

  • omj its funny the guy i like smells like abercrombie or maybe its hollistier its one of the 2 but its funny u said that nick smelled like abercrombie

  • When did Nick get all "hey beautiful, and baby?" lol

  • nick is wearing a life jacket olol

  • LTS

  • why are all the stories all mixed up! i already read this one a while ago its before they went to paris or whatever. i'm so confused.

  • LOOL so are you going to tell me?

    no. the moments passed.

    LMAO

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