hey dude there is a lot of really good stuff in this. i just hate the line 'grand adventure'. i watched this movie as a kid called winnie the pooh's grand adventure.
This second part is really good. It's nicely shot and conveys good story and ideas despite having a lot of time to work with.
The first part isn't very good in my opinion though. I think it could be cut down a bit, and perhaps the things that are cut out could be replaced with something to show how isolated Stittsville or wherever is, or at least feels. Clean is awesome, but he doesn't really fit in this short film I don't think. Just my two cents dude. Good job!
needs sound effects
DarklyDreamingDonald 1 year ago
hey dude there is a lot of really good stuff in this. i just hate the line 'grand adventure'. i watched this movie as a kid called winnie the pooh's grand adventure.
geoffdignam 2 years ago
Ok, so here are my thoughts.
This second part is really good. It's nicely shot and conveys good story and ideas despite having a lot of time to work with.
The first part isn't very good in my opinion though. I think it could be cut down a bit, and perhaps the things that are cut out could be replaced with something to show how isolated Stittsville or wherever is, or at least feels. Clean is awesome, but he doesn't really fit in this short film I don't think. Just my two cents dude. Good job!
Alsamisath 2 years ago