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motherfuc#in mysteryguitarman favourited your vid :) and to bloody right i love it too, keep the passion alive
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all i can say guys is i really appreciate everything, whether its talking about mysteryguitarman, talking positively about my video or criticizing me your still frequenting my channel, and thats the greatest compliment a 19 year old kid with a dream can get. i really love you guys for coming and listening to me. if any of you are in the new york city area i will be performing an open mic night tommorow at the r bar at 7 pm, its on 218 bowery st. in manhattan. if you saw this say hi to me there
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@jasonlapin absolutely
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@valdezmiguel2 man you made your point. you dont like my music. i dont expect everyone to. im not mad at all. just please leave the page alone if you dont like it. i dont want you here unless your good to give me positive criticism or like my stuff. no need to be a dick
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@9lunareclipse truthfully, that assertion makes no sense. by your logic, my comment would be more effective if I had written my own lyrics instead of writing a parody of his. infact, this would be less creative, and completely lost over the internet:
9lunareclipse is a faggot
ohhhh yeahhhh
9lunareclipse sucks dick every night
uhhhhh huhhhhh
but his days are coming to an end soon
uhhhh ohhhhhhh
because like a caterpiller, to a butterfly, his HIV is now AIDS
ohhhh nooooooo
fuck that guy.
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@valdezmiguel2 Well it seems that you are in fact wrong on all point. You certainly do know how to be useless in that it isn't exactly useful to spend your time criticising somehow who not only has the talent but the guts and charity to share that with us.
Not only that but you proved yourself even more useless by wasting what little intellect you obviously have in writing that snide little parody of a verse while at the same time proving you have little or no linguistic talent of your own.
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you have a very nice voice :D guitar sounds a little funny but its nice. keep going!
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what's wrong with your guitar? nice singing
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@valdezmiguel2 comments like that shows how much of a useless twat u are <3
That was pretty good! If I may, I'm more of a musical listening guy so nothing to say about your lyrics. They are decent, a bit cheesy but good and you have good chords but if you don't have that originality yet! You need to intonate the music part of your song! It's always the same melody. You need a good bridge and some different cords. Like John Mayer has one melody but plays it all over the place which gives his music richness. Do the same! Or just focus on your voice and give the guitar to
baalistic1 6 months ago
@baalistic1 thanks for the criticism man, i appreciate it. i know i got a lot to learn on the guitar so def need to keep at that. u should check out my full band version of this song, its on my page if u wanna take a listen maybe ull like it better
jasonlapin 6 months ago
serious question. if i put out a 8 song cd on itunes would you guys be willing to buy it for five dollars? i just want to know before i set my heart on doing it
jasonlapin 11 months ago 5