Original Song - Homeless

Hi There. Wrote a new song a few weeks ago, so finaly i've got the time to record it.

Hope you like it, Enjoy :)

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Lyric:

You see him everyday when you walk in the streets of your city
Hi's lying in the streets, on a bench or even in the park
And with a blancet hi's trying to keep warm from the winter
Just raising his cup to get a dollar to feed his dog

You don't think of him or even want to know him, course you've got it all
You got a house, and a car and a wife and a big fat bankaccount
But with your job you don't have time for your kids, so you give them money
And you think that your money can buy all the love that they need.

Omkvæd:

You don't know how fast it can go
Before you know it the next person sitting there could be you.

Raising you cop, Trying to keep up, hopeing for a fa-mi-ly to take care of you.

So the next time you see him, do yourself a favour and talk with him
You have no idea how happy hi will be just to see you
And i promise you that you will walk away from him with a go---od feeling
So put some dollars in his pocket and let him have fun for a while.

Omkvæd i G:

You don't know how fast it can go
Before you know it the next person sitting there could be you.

You don't know how fast it can go
Before you know it the next person sitting there could be you.

Raising you cop, Trying to keep up, hopeing for a fa-mi-ly to take care of you.

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Category:

Music

Tags:

• country
• folk
• unsigned
• talent
• Guitar
• onehandtwofingers
• acoustic
• original
• song
• homeless
• obama
• vote
• 08
• factor

[stargirrl821]

So.... are you doing anything about homelessness? Just wondering :)

[OneHandTwoFingers]

actually i am. :) and alot more to help everyone i can.

[BeerOutMyNose]

yeah, super melodic. you should check out that yobi contest!

[OneHandTwoFingers]

Hmm haven't heard of it??

[unclchunk]

very good sound!!!! What do you record on?

[archduncan]

Sweet melody, pungent lyrics. Structurally attractive: try to put a pungent counter-melody in a middle eight or other interval, break-away - that "you don't know how..." bit could work if it were more monotonic around a high f# (open first string note with capo 2). Try it with the intention of making people dance - try it in waltz time?

[motionhere]

I enjoyed the melody and the message of this song. Nice work!

[holein6]

:-)

[Jbro326surfer]

amazing song

[DAVIDDAMIENR]

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