Oringinal Acoustic Song: Honey
This is a song I wrote quite a while ago, I'd love to know what you think!
Check these out:
Original song: Of Course I Love You
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XPgZCb91ylc
Original song: Joe Pesci's Just the Same
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7o9VzkyOccU
Original song: Hero
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DsL8mCUNFp8
Original Song: Illusion
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f5_3TFdjOj4
Original Song: When I Come Around
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YiTxVR3HtHU
A lot of people think it's about a certain very famous singer, but I wrote it before everything happened so it can't be really! :D
Honey Lyrics:
She used to step onto her stage,
mic in her hand, smile on her face,
the croud would scream, as she would sing,
loving every minute in the spotlight.
Fans would see her Hollywood smile,
press would exploit her glitzy style,
but on her own, her pain would grow,
Honey was slowly falling.
CHORUS
Honey won't go to the afterparty,
she won't sing, coz her hearts departed,
she just sits around, and cries to herself.
Remembers the girl she used to be,
singing and dancing, living free,
now she's just a shell,
of that star they called Honey
Sex and drugs, rock and roll,
turned her from that porcelain doll,
into the mess in the ripped up dress,
drinking in the corner.
You would't even know, that it was her,
head on the table shes wrapped in fur,
another night out and without a doubt,
Honey keeps on falling.
CHORUS
Honey won't go to the afterparty,
she won't sing, coz her hearts departed,
she just sits around, and cries to herself.
Remembers the girl she used to be,
singing and dancing, living free,
now she's just a shell,
of that star they called Honey
She gave her life when she signed her deal,
a 5 album contract, set in steel,
no going back, its a one way track,
ends up in a grave yard.
Honey was a girl who never knew,
the industry and what it'll do,
to a beauty queen, who had a dream,
but Honey has sadly fallen.
CHORUS
Honey can't go to her after party,
she cant sing coz her soul's departed,
fans all hear the news, they come to mourn her,
Honey couldn't take all the pressure,
giving her life for the people's pleasure,
at the age of 23,
what a waste of the star Honey.
Honey couldn't take all the pressure,
giving her life for the people's pleasure,
at the age of 23,
what a waste of the star Honey
@allloyd66 GREAT JOB!
2MorrowsFuture 2 months ago
this ones really sweet, I like how your voice matches the lyrics by sounding sorrowful. brilliant :) x
catrinvincent 2 years ago
Hey! Love that you're playing my music! That chord is my wierd way of playing an F. I Wrap my thumb round the top :)
allloyd66 2 years ago
dude you are awesome keep it up
greysword1908 2 years ago
Very Cool!!! Nice chord progression, well done.
JonWunderlichMusic 3 years ago
nice song dude keep it up!
acalvendia 3 years ago
Nice work man. Keep it up.
"She gave her life when she signed her deal"
daylife905 3 years ago
Nowadays it's very hard to find really good&meaningful songs in English. But I found what I was looking for. Keep going, Al! You do amazingly nice job! And from now on you have one more russian fan. Thank you for the songs. Acoustic sounds brilliant - makes me cry:(
diplomatfoxy 3 years ago
Hey, this song is yet another good one. I like the lyrics and music, be nice to perhaps hear you use some dynamics in a new song and maybe a different style. Then we can see what your really made of. :)
Dodloper 3 years ago
Another good song! you should make a record!
4RineSs 3 years ago