Cry on my shoulder, I'm a [[friend]] - Part 1

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Uploaded by on Sep 23, 2009

The picture in the video was made by me:], and the song that WAS in it was Cry, by James Blunt, but sadly it was copyrighted. NOT COOL.

I was going to suggest that you listen to it while you read this, but if you want to, your going to have to find a link on youtube to it. aghhh screw copyrights

well, anyways, read on:D
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Demi walked straight into her empty house. Thank God no ones home. She locked the door and quickly put on the alarm. Tears rimmed the inside of her eyelids, threatening to spill, as she made her way to the upstairs bathroom. Demi shut the door behind her, resting her sweaty back against it. A sob tore through her body and she slid down. Tears began pouring down her face. How could this happen? She let her head tilt slightly back against the wooden door. She stared at the white ceiling: feeling as if the walls were closing in. Her heart was racing. Her mind was spinning. Sweat dripped down the side of her face. Her jeans were stained with blood. She had no energy left. All she wanted to do was cry. And thats exactly what she did.


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Flashbacks ran through her mind like scenes from a horror movie. As these memories flooded head, a sudden noise came from downstairs.

She froze.
Every hair on her body stood up. She held her breath as the alarm went off. She attempted to stay calm, trying not to scream, reminding herself that the police would be here soon. But unfortunately, all hope vanished as she heard the alarm turn off. He knows the code. Her heart rate sped up; if thats even possible. Demi listened to the floor boards creak as he walked toward her hiding spot. Her body went numb as she thought about what could happen next.


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The knob turned and the door opened slowly. He was much stronger than her, and therefore had no problem with the door, even with her resting against it. Demi closed her eyes: not wanting to see his face again. He walked inside the room, and closed the door. She only shut her eyes tighter, and wrapped her arms around her knees, bringing them to her chest.

"Demi," she heard a soft voice breathe.

This wasnt the voice of the traitor who stole something so special. This voice was soft and kind. Cautiously, Demi opened her eyes and looked up at the figure in front of her.

She let out the breath she was holding in for so long. Instantly, relief over came her body. But, she wasnt sure what to do. Should she laugh...scream...cry? A wave of emotions over took, and her body answered her by another sob escaping out of her lips.

Joe knelt down to her level. His eyes searched her face for some kind of answer. He reached his hand toward her face and carefully cupped her cheek, as if she was the most fragile thing in the world.

Demi leaned into his touch, enjoying the feeling of his soft skin against hers. Joe wrapped strong arms around her and pulled her into his chest. "Shhh... its okay. Your safe. I got you." And that was all Demi needed to hear. She buried her head in his chest and started to sob. He held her close.


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Hey guys[:
this is just something I wrote pretty quick today,
and I know its not that good, but I just thought I'd
share it with you=D

Part two will be comming up soon

please comment
rate
and subscribe.

&& if you have any suggestions for me,
it would be GREAT.

thanks so much everybody,
I'm already soo close to 60 subscribers.
thanks to everybody who subs,
it means so much[:

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Uploader Comments (MustBeLove15)

  • i think u make one of the best jemi stories in youtube!! Loved it!! =) One thing i'm questioning right now is the blood. 0.o

  • aww thanks so much =D

    (that made my day)

    &

    as for the blood...well.. your just going to have to wait and find out>;] haha

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  • this is sooo nice please make it a story

  • omgomgomgomgomg.....she was raped......0.o

  • GREAT!!! but its kinda confusing

  • when i was first starting to read i was like.. WTF!?! good horror movie (: hahah

  • thats awsome i subbed nd rated cud yuh sub me bak nd my collab channel videos coming soon i love jemi storys i juz started one on this channel let me no wat yuh think ??

    xxx

  • you make really good jemi stories .. like "burning desire" that was a good one , you should make a sequel for that .. ! but yeah this is one sounds really good :)

  • AWESOME!!!! :D

    sure great as the others!!!! ;D

    dude, you're an awesome writter

  • wow!

    this is amazing!!!

    Sad.... but amazing!

    awsome.... and amazing!

    I wish it was longer so i could read more.... but STILL amazing!

    Haha! Its just amazing..!!

    I'm trying to think what happend next,,, Hmmm I wonder if its right....

    BUT I BET ITS AMAZING!!!1

    Haha!

    P.s I said amazing SEVEN times in this comment :O x

  • AWSOMNESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!­!

    one of the best jemi storys i have read.

    Great job dude!

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