the best poem ever love and death

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Uploaded by on Jul 30, 2009

i made this becuz i can i did it from my heart no internet no help
i did my best plz rate and comment oh and subscribe

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  • @seikster I agree with what you've said about the poem being cliched etc but you haven't restricted yourself to a critique, you've dished out abuse as well. Why do that?

  • @seikster please dude....yeah its a bad and very traditional poem but thats no reason to say Fuck You and tell him he doesnt know anything...yeah, its definetly not the best poem ever but calm down please. Im thirteen and considered more talented than most adults at poetry. just cuz ur thirteen doesnt mean u cant have a talent just cuz ur young. so please, be quiet.

  • U suck...

  • God not real and the songs dumb but i like the poem!

  • this is better,

    For love is joy, the love has been given Jesus don't let it pass you Love is patient it is waiting for you God is waiting.

  • that was a nice poem and i love pie :)

  • Crappy and happy? Weak rhymes. The content is cliché, and so are the rhymes. Congratulations, you have written a poem that’s been written over 1000 times and has been played as mainstream music for decades.

    Don’t you dare have the narcissism to call this “the best poem ever.” I’m sure you’re just a pathetic 13 year old who wants to die over some girl who has never talked to you. You won’t really die; in fact, I know you’re reading this right now. Fuck you, man. You don’t understand anything.

  • not my kind of poem

  • I LIKE PIE! lol

  • lol nice poem XD

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