The 12 days of W131

Our version of the 12 days of Christmas created for our final portfolio presentation for senior composition.
Starring: Nick, Gaby and Emily
Filmed by: Jake

Lyrics:
On the first day of w131
Mrs Hughes gave to me
A goal to perfect my writing

On the 2nd day of w131
Mrs Hughes gave to me
2 in class essays
To improve my brainstorming skills

On the 3rd day of w131
Mrs Hughes gave to me
3 hours of
Super size me
To show the power of argument

On the 4th day of w131
Mrs Hughes gave to me
4 pages of
A narrative
Which showed us
the importance of imagery

On the 5th day of w131
Mrs Hughes read to me
I WANNA IGUANA
This story showed
the importance of
Ethos pathos logos
And that iguanas make awesome pets

On the 6h day of w131
Mrs Hughes gave to me
6 pages of
RHETORICAL ANALYSIS
This showed us
How to sammich
The speaker's quotes
And use our voice properly

On the 7th day of w131
Mrs Hughes gave to me
7 minus one journals
6 effective stories
FROM NORTON FIELD GUIDE
We learned how
to answer prompts
using text support
to mature our writing capability

On the 8th day of w131
Mrs Hughes gave to me
8 inspires sources
To back up our paper
And support our thoughts
INSPIRE'S SO SLOW!
Despite its flaws
We work with it
To research stuff
And make our paper factually correct.

On the 9th day of w131
Mrs. Hughes gave to me
9 printed pages
From a single source
We had to learn
To sift through the text
ANALYZING AS WE GO
These notes helped
Us to find
Info we could use
And improve our flow in writing.

On the 10th day of w131
Mrs Hughes gave to me
10 Fingers typing
To complete our last draft
for the research paper
Effectively using time
Because we kinda dwelled on
PROCRASTINATION!!
And now we gotta
Complete the final
Revisions that show
our immense growth through the semester

On the 11th day of w131
Mrs Hughes gave to me
11 brain cells pulsing
To revise the paper;
Changes to our word choice,
Sentence fluency and voice
To show improvements
on the permanent Portfolio
FOR THE END OF THE SEMESTER
Showing off our
skills and revealing
How we've grown
And the growth is seen clearly

On the 12th day of w131
Mrs Hughes gave to me
12 useful power points
11 virtual assignments
10 moodle forums
9 D days of comp
8 research sources
7 hours of facebook
6 scented objects
5 CONFERENCE CRUNCHES!
4 excellent papers
3 thesis statements
2 collective portfolios
And one greatly improved writer.

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