Poetic Prose
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Killawesome!! These ARE poems, modern poems, and as such, are brilliant ones! Myself's a poem person, too, and I've got to love these, really. And just because they're so personal (lyrical) and have a rhythmic sequence of the ideas/images, they easily fall under the category of poetry, despite any prose-like characteristics. That is, it's simply poetry, and, again, as such, is greeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaat!
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your voice is so sweet... :) I like it...
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Beautiful...^_^
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wow.... just wow. It is awesomely good.
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@goneviral69 but if it's like the poems in def jam poetry....well than yeah character is necessary
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@goneviral69 i like to read my poetry and prose in monotone....it just....works....but depends what your reading i guess
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Yeah, me too, really ! It's a wonderful way to express one's feelings and so much stronger than a simply text. Don't we all have these intense moments in life in which we want to communicate us to someone regarding something which really moves us ? Such prose is just the right form for it, if you ask me...
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(until 4:47) Oh, this was so fantastic !!! Omg, you really overwhelmed my with this prose. What surprised me was the way you've stretched time for going into details. That was very good... just the right think to do, because when you're in love with someone it seems like time stands still... *sigh* so great... And what a shame all I have time for right now is to leave nothing but a short comment...
I write prose too. Mine is not nearly as good though. Maybe someday i'll get the nerve up to post some of mine online. But i don't know. They are all pretty personal. I suppose yours are too though, right?
Rhaylynn 2 years ago
I think anything we write is our very soul on paper and in words. Can't get much more personal. Thankfully, I keep most my meanings hidden.
KicesiesVlog 2 years ago
Your poems are like a storm, full of emotion reflective of a heart in turmoil, passion exploding, rushing forth. Then when you read them in such a drab monotone there is injected a disappointment! What happened to the heart which experienced the storm? What are you
afraid of? Let yourself go as that's the only way you will be loved!
goneviral69 4 years ago
The monotone is oh so intentional.
KicesiesVlog 4 years ago