A young girl learns to tie shoelaces in a most unexpected circumstance. A short film contest submission. I had two days to write and a few hours to film. Kid actors and their bedtimes!
A few technical things that you could look at. I think that there was a little much blood when she is lying on the bathroom floor. A smear on her arm would have (in my opinion) had more of an emotional impact than the globs. Also the shot at 3:16 looked a little home video for me. All around though a thoroughly professional film and being very honest it moved me to tears. Great Job and keep putting that 35mm adapter to good use
dude this short film was off the charts I was actually moved to tears by the child tying moms shoe and tickling her. Very good work. I am definately going to try that 35 mm filter.
This was very good, I liked the story, it was sad though, would like to see more.
IAmTheFarmer 2 years ago
i enjoyed it, well done
RabidSquirrelMovies 2 years ago
Well done man, I love seeing this kind of indie stuff.
trenta04 2 years ago
A few technical things that you could look at. I think that there was a little much blood when she is lying on the bathroom floor. A smear on her arm would have (in my opinion) had more of an emotional impact than the globs. Also the shot at 3:16 looked a little home video for me. All around though a thoroughly professional film and being very honest it moved me to tears. Great Job and keep putting that 35mm adapter to good use
Whitefox0RuneLord0 2 years ago
dude this short film was off the charts I was actually moved to tears by the child tying moms shoe and tickling her. Very good work. I am definately going to try that 35 mm filter.
neostanz 2 years ago
this was amazing
tinydancerforeal 4 years ago
jesus, why are you in the featured comedy channels? depressing.
neilhatesyou 4 years ago