ignore the flats and sharps...im not a good singer and i know it. *sigh*
and especially ignore the painful flat near the end...please...
oh...don't mind my eyes too...they look chinkier than usual and really weird coz of the eyeliner that i experimented on. haha...distracting, i know...
don't forget to comment!
Don't leave me in all this pain
Don't leave me out in the rain
Come back and bring back my smile
Come and take these tears away
I need your arms to hold me now
The night are so unkind
Bring back those nights when I held you beside me
Un-break my heart
Say you'll me again
Undo this hurt you caused
When you walked out the door
And walked out of my life
Un-cry these tears
I cried so many nights
Un-break my heart
My heart
Take back that sad word good-bye
Bring back the joy to my life
Don't leave me here with these tears
Come and kiss that pain away
I can't forget the day you left
Time is so unkind
And life is so cruel without you here beside me
Un-break my heart
Say you'll love me again
Undo this hurt you caused
When you walked out the door
And walked out of my life
Un-cry these tears
I cried so many nights
Un-break my heart
My heart
Don't leave me in all this pain
Don't leave me out in the rain
Bring back the nights when I held you beside me
Un-break my heart
Say you'll love me again
Undo this hurt you caused
When you walked out the door
And walked out of my life
Un-cry that tears
I cried so many, many nights
Un-break my
Un-break my heart
Come back and say you love me
Un-break my heart
Sweet darlin'
Without you I just can't go on
Can't go on....
Honestly... one: I'm not trying to make you uncomfortable, but you may be plump but you're gorgeous. Two: I like the eyeliner ^.^ Three: At its core, you DO have a great voice and your sense of tone is fairly good. I think this could be better if you stay in your own range and sing with your own style. Some parts were pitchy and it seemed like your true voice was trying its best to come through and it was *beautiful* but it seemed like it was being overrun by trying to stay with Toni's style.
babygirladdy 1 year ago
@babygirladdy *blushing* lol. yeah i agree with what ur saying about my voice...need to find myself, i guess, when im singing. still havent found what im supposed to find, though. lol...but thank you VERY much for that very constructive comment! ^_^
phoenixsong 1 year ago