Mad World (Jonas Spanking Story) Chapter 16

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Recap: Kevin's sick, Taylor is failing 2 classes and hasn't showed his report card to Paul.

Paul's POV
(Next day)
Kevin's really sick at the moment, he can't even get out of bed and he keeps throwing up. Hopefully he'll be feeling better soon and hopefully no one else will get what he has.

Taylor's POV

Ok I have my report card... I might as well go inside and say "Just spank me now before you even look at my card" It would be much easier then telling him why I'm failing, which I have no idea why I am? I thought I was doing great in them classes... I went inside and gave my dad the report card.
Paul: "Let's see then" He opened it and he looked kind of disappointed in me.
Taylor: "It's not my fault... I'm trying my best, I thought I was doing ok in them classes"
Paul: "Well your obviously not trying hard enough Taylor, you need to stay focused"
Taylor: "I am dad..."
Paul: "Well it doesn't look like it, if your grades don't go up then your getting extra help and a tutor, I will not have my sons failing"
Taylor: "Kay..." I grabbed my report card back and stuffed it away in my bag.
Paul: "Go to you room..."
Taylor: "Am I getting punished..?"
Paul: "I think you deserve it"
Taylor: "But I've been trying my best, it's not like I don't care, like Joe"
Paul: "Joe got all C's your failing 2 classes"
Taylor: "Yeah but Joe doesn't care, if he was failing every thing in life he wouldn't care"
Paul: "Your still failing, now go upstairs"
Taylor: "What ever..." I stormed upstairs to my room and slammed the door, I kind of knew that was coming but this is so not my fault.
After 10 minuets I heard dad coming up the stairs then before I knew it he was in my room.
Paul: "Pants down Taylor" I did what dad said, I don't want to make more trouble for myself. Dad grabbed his belt, I braced myself for what was about to happen. SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK All the sharp, painful smacks hit my sit spot, urg! It hurts so much! SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK. After about 40 my eyes were watering and my butt was on fire! He soon stopped and I slowly/ gently pulled my pants back on.
Paul: "Now I want you to work harder"
Taylor: "I-I will dad..."
Paul: "Good"
Soon came a familiar noise of Kevin throwing up in his room, dad hurried out and went to his room, I slammed my door and slowly laid on my bed.

Paul's POV

As I walked into Kevin's room, he was throwing up into his bucket, I went over to him and slowly rubbed his back, poor Kev... it's horrible to see your kids sick.
Kevin: "I h-ate this..." He groaned and slowly laid back in his bed.
Paul: "I know... let me get you a clean bucket.." I grabbed his almost over flowing bucket and cleaned it out in the bathroom, and then I went back to him and put it next to his bed.
Paul: "Do you need anything Kev?"
Kevin: "No... well... to g-et better"
Paul: "If you rest then you will"
Kevin: "I've be-en resting all day, I f-eel no better"
Paul: "You will, it takes time" With that Kevin snuggled into his bed and closed his tired eyes, I kissed his head then left his room, he seriously needs a shower soon... he smells of puke and sweat...

Joe's POV

While I was walking home, I saw auditions for a musical called "Les Miserable" I have no idea what that's about, I know Nick likes classical musicals like that, I don't think that would be my kind of thing but I really do want to be famous and all that.

When will Kevin start to feel better? Will Joe try out for the Musical? Will Joe tell Nick to audition? Just as a thought, what would you like to see happen in this story? Tell me your ideas! And i may use them! I'll even credit you! :D I'll also be writing more now it's the summer! WOO Lol Please comment!

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  • great job! poor kev :)

  • awesome ep

    poor kevin

    hopefully soon

    maybay if not nick probably will

    yes

  • 1. probably soon, but i have a feeling other people will get sick from him

    2. i sure hope so :D

    3. hmmm, i think so

    I think you have a nice balance in this story, not TOO much drama, not TOO much illness, not TOO much trouble :D just keep it up! if you need ideas just IM me.. lol

  • 1. later but its too early

    2. i think joe should try out, but i think that nick should too without joe knowing and then have nick get the part and not joes. just an idea

  • 1) it's too soon maybe another several days

    2. he might idk he might want it to be just him but he may tell nick since he knows nick likes classical music.

  • Bad bad taylor!!!! I bet he is trying but hes either not getting it or he gets distracted!

    No I don't think Kevin will feel better soon. I don't know maybe but its been too soon. I think it will take another week or so.

    I think that Joe will try out but won't tell Nick because he wants it to just be him. He won't want Nick to be on it too.

  • 1. I think Kevin will feel better soon. He has to get worse though. Then he can get better.

    2. I think Joe should try out for the musical

    3. I think Joe should tell Nick to audition for the musical

    4. I don't know... Joe should get the part in the musical and so should Nick. :-)

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