Beside the Seaside (Excerpt)
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Love the "theatricalness" of it.
It is a bit obvious, the age difference, could the script be altered to accommodate this? An Uncle /nephew, perhaps? I like the boldness of the piece! Well done.
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that pretty good!! John has been telling me about this project for a while now!!
well done!!
sam
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And just as an opinon - it might be worth sorting out the balance - the filmed stuff seems a little bright in comparison to the background. You could also try drawing in a conical feathered mask in to create the illusion that the scene is lit from a single lightbulb above. If you get my drift? =D
(and incidentally, my name is spelled with one "l" :P )
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This looks awesome, Tom! Glad it turned out so well :)
And the bluescreen work is great too :D
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Cheers Phil, looking back on it i can see there are quite a few problems with it - the age difference (I should be in my 40s!) and it drags quite a lot, perhaps needing more movement and location change to another part of the office? Still, it's a first attempt really. As for the techniclities, I wish I could have lit it properly beforehand, that way the lighting would be much better. Apologies for the extra 'l' in your name too! T
afrovicar 2 years ago