RISE OF THE PHOENIX

The first single from AtunSenGeb's solo album: Rise Like A Phoenix. Beat by Rokwiler

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Music

Tags:

• THE LOST CHILDREN OF BABYLON
• ATUN SEN GEB
• RASUL ALLAH 7
• COSMIC CRUSADER
• LEX STARWIND
• JON MURDOCK
• ZEITGEIST SPIRIT OF THE AGE
• BROTHER ANPU
• WU TANG
• INTERNATIONAL
• ATUM RE
• NUWAUPIAN
• EGYPT
• HORUS
• KANYE WEST
• MICHAEL VICK
• LCOB PRODUCTIONS
• RICH RAW
• CONSCIUOS HIP HOP

[scizz09]

@MrJeffmurphy Word... that's y I said checkout my work u might find something u like betta. I like constructive criticism I'd be willing to send you a cd. The hook I was inspired by an interview wit Mike Vick when he first got signed my the Eagles. He likened himself to the phoenix rising from the ashes... so my aim was to show how after all we been through we would still rise like the phoenix. Also inspired by Maafa 21 documentary on Eugenics.

[MrJeffmurphy]

@scizz09 I' m black by the way...and maybe the garbage comment was a little harsh....i done listened to it about 8 times and i think you ok....but when i first heard your hook, thats the first thing that came to mind....you could' ve done alot better with that...you got your own rapping style (like a cross between sticky fingaz and mos def) but u aren't garbage....just work a little harder on your craft.....

[scizz09]

@MrJeffmurphy alone... but u wanted a rize outta me i guess. It will be handled in the chamber...

[scizz09]

@MrJeffmurphy No offense but are you Caucasian? Even if you're not, again u have a rite to think what u may about my lyrics. Perhaps you would listen to a whole production of mine and then make an opinion about that. I have a way of coding you just dont get. Not meant for people like you. I been around rap too, all my life, absorbing many styles and formulated my aun. Thanx for listenin; but i dont appreciate the garbage comment...makes me think like u wanna battle; cuz u coulda jus left it

[MrJeffmurphy]

@scizz09 I hear your story. It just isn' t engaging. If you want an example of an underground rapper having a well formated song, check out bizzle' s "explaining to do"...not only did he give his side of the story, he gives you Jay' s perspective. I can tell you write a line, then think of the next line to go with it, rather than thinking 4 bars ahead. you are just putting words together, not telling a story....i know rap...i' ve been around it too long...i wrote and i was a dj....

[scizz09]

@MrJeffmurphy I appreciate your opinion, however I dont agree that I don't tell a story... maybe you can't relate to the story, IDK. Do you have an example of something you did or produced that I should pattern myself after? I doubt it... I'm a unique wordsmith bruh. As you can see, you have an opposite opinion from the other comments. Im NOT concerned with today's rap or yesterday's or the future. I do what I do

[MrJeffmurphy]

@scizz09 The hook is too simple. It sounds like it was made in 5 mins. The lyrics are all over the place. There' s no format to the song....the first verse could be the second and vice versa....The flow is not versatile...Today' s rap you got to be able ride a beat in many different ways......The song was just boring....Your lyrics wasnt strong enough for the beat....I should be paying more attention to the lyrics than the beat...work more on telling a story with your song than just rapping.

[scizz09]

@MrJeffmurphy Y do u think that?

[MrJeffmurphy]

garbage.....

[kyronavery]

Yo Fam,

I love this song. Is does somthin to me. The monotone flow, run on rhyme scheme, crazy hook, ad libs, & fire beat. AtunSenGeb is a fuckin problem.....you heard it here 1st......watch out for this dude! Keep Grindin Fam 2012 will be the official return of Esoteric Hip-Hop, stay the course, YOUR TIME IS COMING SOON!