Deck of Cards: [Ultimate Writer's Contest; ROUND 3]
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Omg! This is so heartbreaking! when Selena talked about her sister anyways. SHOWER!
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this is amazing:')
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Shower, this was amazinggggg <3
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shower, you really made this one-shot very moving :)
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shower, aww that really was heartwarming :)
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showerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
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shower, AMAZIN-G, u have gotta win! <3
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that was amazing!! shower <3
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selena was perfect for the younger sisterr, i loved this.
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I seriously hope you win.
This is one of the best stories I've read on youtube.
I think I'll go have a shower now.
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that was beautiful and i loved how you made her autistic, it fit perfectly.
i need to 'shower' now :D
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WOW!!!! this is awesome im glad tha tu got to make it to this round b/c u deserve it ure writing is awesome n im actually crying b/c this story seems so real it relates to alot of families ...good job i hope u make it to the nxt round
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oh and shower
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This made me cry. I don't know why. It was that feeling when you relate to something and it makes you cry! But I was really glad you made it into the next round.
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I really did cry while I was watching this . I think you really are an amazing writer. This story was incredible. Absoutely beautiful :) And at the end when it said walk this path I was listening to Fifteen and it said walk through the doors and bamm, I started balling :|. I know Im wierdd
shower :)
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This is such a beautifully written story! It's like I could see it right in front of my eyes
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What's autistic?Sorry,I scuk at words :/ I love the details in this story XP I wento to take a "shower" ;) ;) *wink,wink*
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OH MY GODD! I JUST READ TO KILL A MOCKINGBIRD FOR ENGLISHHH :D
this was so good. (:
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amazing:)
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OMFG! this is soooooooo amazing! like seriously! when you said Selena was autistic, i wasnt sure how youd have that, but you made it perfect! you should definitely make it to the next round!!!
shower x]
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I love that movie.. its always makes me cry.
You did a really good job, this is alson a sister/sister relationship, I hope you make it to the next round. I was so touched by this. Keep up the great work, and maybe make a series or movie with this sort of plot, it would be cool
NO NEVERMIND
johnnyluver178 2 years ago
@johnnyluver178 O...kay?
stashhjonas 2 years ago
I HATE YOU
johnnyluver178 2 years ago
@johnnyluver178 Uhm.. thanks?
stashhjonas 2 years ago
If you were trying to make me cry, then you've succeeded. I'm officially a mess now, a wreck to say the list. This was so beautiful and I have a really strong feeling you're going to win this round and most likely the whole contest.
Please excuse me while I cry......
oh, btw...shower.
fallenJONAS 2 years ago
AW! Melissa, I didn't mean to make you cry D:
Lol.
But thank you so much. It really means a lot.
stashhjonas 2 years ago