Deck of Cards: [Ultimate Writer's Contest; ROUND 3]

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Uploaded by on Dec 6, 2009

READ HERE (OR BE CONFUSED)!

Haha, wow. I'm quite the major loser, aren't I? Shannon (UntouchableSS27) just uploaded the Ultimate Writer's Contest, Round 3 video & .. I already made mine? :|

Well, then ..

I'M FREAKING OUT! I MADE IT INTO THE NEXT ROUND! You have NO IDEA how ecstatic I am right now! I was so happy that the second I figured out the topic, I rushed to make the next one :)

No worries, however; though I make my stories quickly, I make sure there are no grammatical errors, spelling mistakes, or anything weird like that. Hopefully [cross your fingers!] there weren't any in this :D

So, the topic for Round 3 was .. RELATIONSHIPS! But, not a cliche, lovey-dovey relationship between a boy & girl or something like this. This topic was a relationship between mother/daughter, father/daughter, siblings, friends, etc. :D

And so, I chose a relationship between father & daughter(s). Now, this has a few holes in the story, so I suggest you continue to read .. ;)

Selena is autistic. She's 13 years old in this & Miley is 16. When they were little, their mother abandoned them with their father (who, in this story, was Johnny Depp). He went into a bad case of alcoholism & beat Miley up, thinking she was to blame for all that happened. People found out & she was sent away to a foster family, but Selena was left behind. However, she came back to visit them & he was clean. And I'm guessing the rest is pretty simple :D

It was supposed to be a "heartwarming" story, though sad because of Selena having autism. I had the idea of her being autistic because one of my ultimate favorite movies is Rain Man, starring Tom Cruise :) If you haven't seen it, you're missing a lot, aha ;)

Okay, so .. as for the title: "A Deck of Cards". It was supposed to be 'symbolic', as in ... every time Selena is "shuffling the cards while nervous", she wants to get a new outcome on life. So, whenever she takes out a new card, her life story may change. Did you understand that? Haha. I hope I didn't confuse people xD

So, ENJOY. I really need to stop talking now :]
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*Please write "shower" somewhere in your comment if you read all this.

Tootles!

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  • NO NEVERMIND

  • @johnnyluver178 O...kay?

  • I HATE YOU

  • @johnnyluver178 Uhm.. thanks?

  • If you were trying to make me cry, then you've succeeded. I'm officially a mess now, a wreck to say the list. This was so beautiful and I have a really strong feeling you're going to win this round and most likely the whole contest.

    Please excuse me while I cry......

    oh, btw...shower.

  • AW! Melissa, I didn't mean to make you cry D:

    Lol.

    But thank you so much. It really means a lot.

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  • Omg! This is so heartbreaking! when Selena talked about her sister anyways. SHOWER!

  • this is amazing:')

  • Shower, this was amazinggggg <3

  • shower, you really made this one-shot very moving :)

  • shower, aww that really was heartwarming :)

  • showerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr­rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr.

  • shower, AMAZIN-G, u have gotta win! <3

  • that was amazing!! shower <3

  • selena was perfect for the younger sisterr, i loved this.

  • I seriously hope you win.

    This is one of the best stories I've read on youtube.

    I think I'll go have a shower now.

  • that was beautiful and i loved how you made her autistic, it fit perfectly.

    i need to 'shower' now :D

  • WOW!!!! this is awesome im glad tha tu got to make it to this round b/c u deserve it ure writing is awesome n im actually crying b/c this story seems so real it relates to alot of families ...good job i hope u make it to the nxt round

  • oh and shower

  • This made me cry. I don't know why. It was that feeling when you relate to something and it makes you cry! But I was really glad you made it into the next round.

  • I really did cry while I was watching this . I think you really are an amazing writer. This story was incredible. Absoutely beautiful :) And at the end when it said walk this path I was listening to Fifteen and it said walk through the doors and bamm, I started balling :|. I know Im wierdd

    shower :)

  • This is such a beautifully written story! It's like I could see it right in front of my eyes

  • What's autistic?Sorry,I scuk at words :/ I love the details in this story XP I wento to take a "shower" ;) ;) *wink,wink*

  • OH MY GODD! I JUST READ TO KILL A MOCKINGBIRD FOR ENGLISHHH :D

    this was so good. (:

  • amazing:)

  • OMFG! this is soooooooo amazing! like seriously! when you said Selena was autistic, i wasnt sure how youd have that, but you made it perfect! you should definitely make it to the next round!!!

    shower x]

  • I love that movie.. its always makes me cry.

    You did a really good job, this is alson a sister/sister relationship, I hope you make it to the next round. I was so touched by this. Keep up the great work, and maybe make a series or movie with this sort of plot, it would be cool

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