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beautiful!!! its like readin bout my own life...
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It made me think of Romeo and Juliet, forbidin love
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very well done. i liked it...
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damn almost everything rhymes,, this is totally GREAT XD !
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so cute
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love,,liebe,,eshg
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LOVE THIS
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this poem describes in every way how i feel about her it made me well tear up lol nice job man:) who ever you wrote it to i bet you she loved it:D
r0b3rt0gu3rra 1 year ago
@r0b3rt0gu3rra
I wrote it for my bf, lol...and I am a girl btw :)
malishkalapka 1 year ago 4
nice i write hop and was looking for some thing that would give me ideas for a track im working on,, if u really wrote these poems i want permission to quote one of the poems, ur word play in this one was really good
(with out ur love i think i would die)
(and my life will flash in a blink of an eye)
thats on beat !!!!!
and i like the beat in the back around playing would be hot to sample if theres any way u could send
ange1213 1 year ago
@ange1213
I made this video a long time ago, I dont think I have the song anymore. But you are more than welcome to use those lines, as long as you dont take the whole poem and claim it as yours, because I did write it myself. Hope this helps! Good luck!
malishkalapka 1 year ago
i read the comments first and by the sounds of them i go dang it must be a good poem then when i read it i was like god this is GREAT its TERRIFIC
MissGiGi70 2 years ago 2
thank you :)
malishkalapka 2 years ago