Mississippi (original song)

So here's my first original that i'm posting on youtube. I hope y'all enjoy :)
More shall be coming soon!

lyrics:
your hair was golden
when you reached out to me
your hair was golden
as we swam out to sea
your hair was golden
with you, i wanna be
and we went on floatin by

tall glass of water
with you, i dont mind
tall glass of water
ive got used to it over time
tall glass of water
we are truly one of a kind
and we keep on floatin by

you talked about the mississippi
& oh how youll miss me
well ill be thinkin about you day by day
but my light just flickered
and now i grow tired
so ill think of you in my dreams

INSTRUMENTAL

your hands are stronger
playin those guitar strings
your hands are stronger
dancing up the piano keys
your hands are stronger
lets go watch the talkies
and well keep on floatin by

MISSISSIPPI CHORUS

well spend the dusk dancin cheek by cheek
but dont worry i wont squeak
cause i know ill be safe in your arms
although were still growin
He just might be sewin
our tender lives into one another

but until that time
lets enjoy nighttime
and hold me in your arms again

Category:

Music

Tags:

• haley
• barnes
• mississippi
• original
• dollie90

[haydatzmii]

i love you haley barnes. :)

this is truly a great song, and you are blessed with so much talent. i'm so glad i met you because i don't know what i'd do without you now! :) thanks for being around for me! it means so much!

love you,

shan

[dollie90]

daw thanks shannon :)

i love you so much and i don't know what i'd do without you!

your friendship means so much to me and next year is going to be amazing. yay for lofting all of our beds and having a secret fort underneath!

anywho, I love you, and i'm always here for you.

:)

-Hal

[OlaAndCasey]

I love love love you.

Can you make a CD? I would love that a whole lot.

[Prr4444]

I like this!! Hello from Mississippi

[trinitphs]

Your voice reminds me of the girl from this band 'cocoon' > listen to on youtube!!

[roblightwater]

True Talent! Go Girl!!!

[Cardiovasdcular101]

Can u guys watch my song " The Sound of Music " - it's a soulfull inspiration.

[cayoharksen]

Pô , que sacana, achei que fosse Mississippi- Pussycat. AAhhAA voçê me enganou!!! sem me explicar,a razão ,omotivo ou o propósito do encaixe deste video no meio dos outros das Pussycat; então era para eu cair na armadilha, hein?-fala a verdade vai... ai eu tropecei neste e cai que nem um patinho(é brincadeira) a música sua , interpretação, tonalidade estava muito bom, mas procure outro estilo para seu perfil, tipo mais bandida, sem ficar tão nervosa, se solte e boa sorte!!!

[misslady1908]

Dollie90 that was 100% resplendent! Wow. It took my breath away. Let me know when you release a CD (independent I hope.. so you'll take home most of the money) and I'll buy it! :-)

[SuzieSchade]

Hey this song is great!!! :)

[Spoogliemooglie]

Wow, incredible!

[ForgotteMemories101]

wow lol this is really awesome... I was randomly searching and found this... Amazing song :)

[SixStringStrumming]

Cool hook that comes in after the chorus. You might want to put that in an intro to embed it right away? Your second verse with the lyrics about piano and guitar and hands is great. The first verse lyrics aren't as dear to me but I mean no harm. That little riff after the first chorus is great to but just needs a touch of something to anchor it down. I could never do anything half as good but just thought it might make this even better.