The Taking Boy
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Im still cold lmfao
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@KevJJ888 It's true. This would be a very good alternate take of this story, but the dirty words really were superfluous and ruins it for showing any children.
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hahahahahahah! lolololz..sigh
even though i love shel's work...i gotta say this...this was funny.
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@JohnSmith1985x Youre a real winner. When I wrote this I was so deeply depressed and sadened by the pain that this asshole cause me, sometimes it is the womans fault, but that was not my story. Sounds like you have some serious issues with women, do you shove a dildo up your ass? BTW- the guy is now in prison.
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@KevJJ888 I know.... I agree
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@duchella ...and then, did you shove a big dildo up yur ass crack douchella?!
Sometimes a woman is a stupid bitch to push a man away and it probably was ALL her fault!!
Always other/better fish in the vast sea!
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aye tree! i need some money!
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Loved the ending :D better than the orginal
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lesson: don't be co dependent
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This speaks volumes to my heart--both my personal and universal one. I'm laughing and crying at the same time.....
Thank you.
The dirty words RUINED this!!!!!
KevJJ888 1 year ago 13
I have always thought that the little boy was such a BRAT! Good job. :)
thestitchedimage 3 years ago 7