J Mei ft. Eddie Franks - Syllable Slaughter (prod. Socie)

Off the Iron MCs self-titled debut album. Download it here: http://www.datpiff.com/DJ_Shadowcat_DJ_Coutz_Socie_Iron_MCs_Iron_MCs.m57303.html

Category:

Music

Tags:

• j mei
• eddie franks
• syllable slaughter
• iron mcs
• hip hop
• rap
• beats

[Phajpahee50]

If I may encourage without offending:

Y'alls rhythms are legit, Eddie boy needs style, the beat needs more to it and both of you could've used more words with higher syllable counts.

Other than that, it's cool.

[j2thamei]

@Phajpahee50 word, i appreciate the feedback homie.

[j2thamei]

thanks anice, i feel you.

I mean there's always room for improvement. It's just that many artists view outside criticism (whether it be constructive or not) as a slap in the face, simply cuz it feels like their ability to create intellectual property is being challenged. but that's the way the artistic mind works, so I can't blame 'em. I'm the same way sometimes.

but anyways, thanks for the comments.

[Phajpahee50]

LOL, if you think their is no room for improvement, then we have nothing to talk about... (I'm a rapper too)

and THATS why the industry's watered down... people should always refine their skill, ike.

[anice121]

lol art is an art an your craft cannot be denied man, i been listening for a while be original man stay at it how you do it man real shit man ya syllables and wordsmiths are on point as always man except you've gotten better as usual since Dead Presidents

[anice121]

? what diffrence does t make ? rap is an art, his style is his style lol his words are his words, how can an art form be critiqued ? that  why the industrys so watered down