The Fall
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This video is a response to Christian Filmmakers 24-Hour Contest Intro Video
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those...darn...FOOTSTEPS lol
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Pretty good shooting. The sound mix could have been better even with what you had to work with.
The story was lost behind the acting and the really long intro/opening. A slightly better script would have made this piece sparkle.
I liked it, but it was far too long for the point, and rather than demonstrating the point, you just told us what the point was.
Keep working at showing your story progression. You have a good tale to tell, but you just need more practice with delivery. -Luke
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Great job!
Good luck!
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Creative storyline. There was a lot of truth in that. But your acting could use some help.
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This is pretty cool, huh?
I LOVE the plot. Everyone just has to be patient to get what it is, though.
FairviewStudios11 3 years ago
the guy in the black hoodie is Garrett lance we were in a rush srry
FairviewStudios11 3 years ago