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Uploaded by on May 22, 2009

I am the blindness of my curtains
The dawning of darkness
They are calling
They are inside

I am the eternity of the airless
Ageless in this destruction
They are hearing
They are forever

I am the creature of subconscious
The bonds of my decree
They are suffocation
They are the tragedy

I am the demon that dwells within

And I am the taste of the sweetest mortality

By VisionGhost ©

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  • I love this, it's very dark and gothic. I can relate. You're quite the actor there, VG! ;-) There was a whole lot of passion condensed into that performance and poem.

  • Thank you very much indeed Elf! Yea I had fun doing this but also was actually nervous, that explosion was a last minute idea, if ya notice right before I do the whole scream thing, I momentarily bit my lower lip cos I wasnt sure if I should, then thought "ah fuck it" and wham! Yay!

  • LOL, well it bloody worked I'll give you that! Ha ha! Brilliant poem!

    Have you been writing many poems lately? I checked your MySpace but found no new posts. Mind you, I think I'm gonna' start working on my next poetry performance, we'll see how that goes...

    Having fun, Mr.Journalist? ;-)

    Anyways, it's great talking to ya!

  • I've been very preoccupied, I'm still waiting for officials to process payment and documentation so I can start the course in journalism, its a horrible long wait. So to answer your question, Iv been songwriting recently also working on my other channel! I should have something new up soon, thanks Elf!

  • The depth of yer voice when you reach the line "I am the demon that dwells within'" makes the poem what it is. poems should be said with character and feeling it's not only about the words. very good impact with this one.

  • Wow, thank you very much indeed!!

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  • I'm very impatient, (something that you've probably discovered about me) so I would crack up waiting for something that cool.

    Songwriting? Awesome! Just lyrics or both lyrics and music? I thought you didn't have your guitar anymore, or are you doing it on your laptop?

  • It was a split second decision to do that, at first I wasnt and then I thought what the hell and desiced to launch it. Thank you!

  • loved how you said the line: I am the demon that dwells within

  • hihihihihi..i got a start!

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