Uploaded by VisionGhostPoet on May 22, 2009
I am the blindness of my curtains
The dawning of darkness
They are calling
They are inside
I am the eternity of the airless
Ageless in this destruction
They are hearing
They are forever
I am the creature of subconscious
The bonds of my decree
They are suffocation
They are the tragedy
I am the demon that dwells within
And I am the taste of the sweetest mortality
By VisionGhost ©
#23 - Most Discussed (Today) - Ireland
#5 - Most Discussed (Today) - People & Blogs - Ireland
#28 - Most Discussed (This Week) - People & Blogs - Ireland
#87 - Most Viewed (Today) - People & Blogs - Ireland
#22 - Top Favourited (Today) - People & Blogs - Ireland
#48 - Top Favourited (This Week) - People & Blogs - Ireland
#25 - Top Rated (Today) - Ireland
#4 - Top Rated (Today) - People & Blogs - Ireland
#87 - Top Rated (This Week) - Ireland
#9 - Top Rated (This Week) - People & Blogs - Ireland
-
33 likes, 3 dislikes
Link to this comment:
Uploader Comments (VisionGhostPoet)
All Comments (42)
-
I'm very impatient, (something that you've probably discovered about me) so I would crack up waiting for something that cool.
Songwriting? Awesome! Just lyrics or both lyrics and music? I thought you didn't have your guitar anymore, or are you doing it on your laptop?
fellowtuber123 2 years ago
-
It was a split second decision to do that, at first I wasnt and then I thought what the hell and desiced to launch it. Thank you!
VisionGhostPoet 2 years ago
-
loved how you said the line: I am the demon that dwells within
limegreendarlene 2 years ago
-
hihihihihi..i got a start!
NewBrazdolph 2 years ago
5:48The Foolish, The Meek & The Universeby VisionGhostPoet517 views
4:23Gloria's Bleedingby VisionGhostPoet752 views
2:15Hate?by VisionGhostPoet510 views
2:01The Train is Comingby VisionGhostPoet337 views
4:36I Am Highwayby VisionGhostPoet497 views
1:23Something I Never Wasby VisionGhostPoet544 views
2:53Someone See Meby VisionGhostPoet1,010 views
1:37Same Fearby VisionGhostPoet458 views
1:53I Walk I Bleedby VisionGhostPoet461 views
3:04Axis of Denial 4 - A Conclusion in Deathby VisionGhostPoet277 views
2:12May Yonder the Flowers Growby VisionGhostPoet324 views
2:11Journey - Guest Vocals by Emily A. Saaenby VisionGhostPoet422 views
1:29Video Response Fellowtuber123 (Elf) Rumi - Only...by VisionGhostPoet129 views
9:41TAG VIDEO: WHY LIVE? (LISTEN)by DavidRandallCurtis1,969 views
3:58Sweet Possessionby Elumusic3,313 views
3:29Violent Demonic Possessionby SSRFINC5,928,044 views
50:33The Fry Model Railway & Tara's Palace by Small ...by VisionGhostPoet103 views
9:22Real Exorcism of scary demon possessed girl cau...by manisdoomednow6,416,447 views
7:29Andrzej Żuławski - Possession (1981)by HotForNumbers109,034 views
3:11Possessão (Possession, 1981) - Metrôby srtaquaresma60,634 views
- Loading more suggestions...
I love this, it's very dark and gothic. I can relate. You're quite the actor there, VG! ;-) There was a whole lot of passion condensed into that performance and poem.
fellowtuber123 2 years ago
Thank you very much indeed Elf! Yea I had fun doing this but also was actually nervous, that explosion was a last minute idea, if ya notice right before I do the whole scream thing, I momentarily bit my lower lip cos I wasnt sure if I should, then thought "ah fuck it" and wham! Yay!
VisionGhostPoet 2 years ago
LOL, well it bloody worked I'll give you that! Ha ha! Brilliant poem!
Have you been writing many poems lately? I checked your MySpace but found no new posts. Mind you, I think I'm gonna' start working on my next poetry performance, we'll see how that goes...
Having fun, Mr.Journalist? ;-)
Anyways, it's great talking to ya!
fellowtuber123 2 years ago
I've been very preoccupied, I'm still waiting for officials to process payment and documentation so I can start the course in journalism, its a horrible long wait. So to answer your question, Iv been songwriting recently also working on my other channel! I should have something new up soon, thanks Elf!
VisionGhostPoet 2 years ago
The depth of yer voice when you reach the line "I am the demon that dwells within'" makes the poem what it is. poems should be said with character and feeling it's not only about the words. very good impact with this one.
TrishB323 2 years ago
Wow, thank you very much indeed!!
VisionGhostPoet 2 years ago