I can see your talent and emotion but your body and voice needs to match it. first the body movements have to emphasize your speech and vary at the same time to create a greater effect and yours repeat alot but they do still hold lots of emotion behind them just use different ways to express that. I liked the accents very well done but your voice also needs to have slightly different pitches and variations. otherwise a well done performance
Oh.... and you're in a stinky dungeon about to DIE.... you're not trying to convince your sister that you're right in a mundane argument, which is all I am getting right now.
Very nice. As a theater actress in training I commend you. :) Just a note though- try not to walk forward and back too much. If you take a step forward, make it deliberate, and if you take a step back, don't make it because you know you are getting too close to the camera, or the directors. :) Good job.
I can see your talent and emotion but your body and voice needs to match it. first the body movements have to emphasize your speech and vary at the same time to create a greater effect and yours repeat alot but they do still hold lots of emotion behind them just use different ways to express that. I liked the accents very well done but your voice also needs to have slightly different pitches and variations. otherwise a well done performance
ballin3393 1 year ago
can u subscribe to my page man becuz i subbed u already
JUANO510 2 years ago
great!!!! 5 stars man.... im gonna subscribe. can you do the same and tell me what u think of my monologues... great job man
JUANO510 2 years ago
Your Shakespeare was more than a little off... you're not making a sales pitch, you are avoiding death. Try getting that across to us next time.
cheatsatmonopoly 2 years ago
Oh.... and you're in a stinky dungeon about to DIE.... you're not trying to convince your sister that you're right in a mundane argument, which is all I am getting right now.
Say "Let me Live" till you get it "right."
thenakedtruth2 2 years ago 2
Plant your feet. And for the Love of Shakespeare tie your hands down.
thenakedtruth2 2 years ago
truly amazing acting i beleived you and wanted to see more and with u interacting with others
Kojitai1 3 years ago
zero speach. Please don't bring elevated text down to your level. RISE TO MEET IT
BleedBlack0720 3 years ago
A bit overdone for me. Not very belivable...watch your inflictions...but i loooove your enthusiasm!
LoverofStage 3 years ago
Very nice. As a theater actress in training I commend you. :) Just a note though- try not to walk forward and back too much. If you take a step forward, make it deliberate, and if you take a step back, don't make it because you know you are getting too close to the camera, or the directors. :) Good job.
trysissy 3 years ago