[WINNER!]Tommy Tizzle Official Rap Contest 2010 - Impressive[WINNER!]

This is my entry into the 2010 Tommy Tizzle Official Rap Contest. As I read the rules for the contest, one rule stuck out to me. "Be Creative." So that is what I did. We took the instrumental and chopped it up, giving it an intro and adding layers to it to give the intro a nicer sound along with adding some cuts in the instrumental to emphasize the lyrics. (The verse remained the same 24 bar length as required.) When shooting the Video I had my sister translate the lyrics of the chorus in a way where she could sign them in American Sign Language. Hope you enjoy!
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Lyrics:

When all this started,
I really thought you were good-for-me,
You balanced out my anger,
Let my rage escape through-my-speech,
But I let you-believe,
That what we had was super-sweet,
And that when you and I created something,
It was too-unique,
But I was brain washed,
Honestly you led-me-on,
Even when you didn't speak,
Everything you said-was-wrong,
You taught me lessons and direction,
But the message-gone,
I'm tearing every page,
Every sentence, Every effin-song,
That I ever made-for-you,
I have to find a way-to-prove,
That I don't need to think about you,
Every single day-or-two,
And now my face-is-blue,
I'm going-in-the-ground,
Because I'm sick of getting kicked,
Every moment-that-I'm-down,
Now I'm drippin' like I'm grippin',
And I'm opening-a-cloud,
This isn't what I pictured,
So I'm throwin'-in-the-towel,
Some how...
You seem to freeze-me-in-this-open-pit,
You get mean, You proceed,
To beat-me-till-I'm-motionless,
And now inside this scene,
It doesn't seem-that-we-could-coexist
Cause when a door opens for me,
You just go and close-it-quick,
You want attention,
You're consuming-all-my-time,
And I don't know what to do,
When the music-intertwines,
With my life, it's no surprise,
That I'm bluer-than-the-skies,
You just look in my mind,
And you do-it-every-time,
You and I..
We used to be the truest-of-friends,
But I'll never feel that way About my music-again,
The End.

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[bassdose5]

this guy is shit.

[GoldMedalCrew]

@bassdose5 <3

[vandoleyserrano13]

cool vid

[GoldMedalCrew]

@vandoleyserrano13 Thanks be sure to sub!

[THEHRHOFTIME]

That's real spit...

-Da Wize Deciple

[GoldMedalCrew]

@THEHRHOFTIME Thanks man, check out my remix of Drakes - The Winner that i did in honor of winning this contest!

-Impressive

[BFHeroEric]

lol thumbs up for droppin paper ahahah

[410hiphop]

WILLIAM SHAKESPEAR(410HIPHOP) KILLED IT

[whocedMarlMS]

that was impressive

[dazzaondmic]

wow that was a good verse ...i make freeverses check mine out plz

[salamandra901]

Love it!! = )