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poison in bottles,
root of folly and immorality,
destroys character.
my first haiku. please comment me on how i can improve.
thank you Ms. Hans
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wow thanks this helped me alot lol im terrible at haiku's!
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Gentle swimming swan,
gliding swiftly across the,
shiny sunny pond.
25cutebunny 3 months ago
@25cutebunny Great job! Syllables are correct and I like the use of expressive language.
artsyamerican 1 month ago
Eagles spread their wings
From the morn to the evening
They kill in silence
Guitar360Dude 3 months ago
@Guitar360Dude Good job! Try adding more descriptive language. Paint a picture with your Haiku. : )
artsyamerican 1 month ago
EAGLE FYLING HIGH
CAN YOU REACH THE MOON AND SUN
EAGLE IN THE SKY.
Should Haikus have a title?
THANK YOU FOR YOUR VIDEO.
PALOMITA694 4 months ago
@PALOMITA694 Good job. Most Haiku's I've seen have a title. Try adding more descriptive language. Paint a picture with your Haiku. : )
artsyamerican 1 month ago