Forbiden Fruit - Ch. 4 - la push
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The slut-shaming in this chapter hurts.
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Do sex on me lol XD
But seriously, I hate it when little kids write about rape and don't even
know what they are talking about.
It's disgusting.
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When I got to "and hit me with a shoe all night" it was too much. I have never laughed so hard, or had to wipe away more tears of mirth.
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Because any girl could go out to social events and still think of the HAWT Ewdard Cullen after being raped, then later treat it in text so normally as though it happened all the time. And of course NOT COMPLAIN.
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"...and then he raped me and hit me with a shoe all night and i didnt even complain" - I DIED.
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-"I'd been saving myself for the right guy and for marriage"
5 minutes later
-"Have sex with me now Edward"
So much for those resolutions.
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'He ran away crying'
Oh dear God
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hears "mealancholy", mind goes immediately to the Gorillaz.
DEAR LORD I HOPE THAT WASN'T WHERE SHE GOT IT FROM!
Any way, your voice makes this bearabel.
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"Yep, that's Bella." I love your comments!
The way you handled the voices of the trinity of goth girls was absolutely hillarious.
Ninja1Ninja2 1 month ago 48
"OMG, SWEET LADY!"
Brelettable 1 month ago 40