Wow.... Now im writing a book?
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also the time switches from present to past, (or whatever you call it.)
are you a fan of Harry Potter? :P
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no offense, but i do not think this is a good book. Just listen to me, friendly criticism.
1.) I think that for the beginning of a book you need something more captivating, not the introduction of several characters and them going to school and being late. i realize that u are still working on it.
2.) the sentences are not constructed in an interesting way and there are hardly any adjectives, besides the fact that you repeated the "Wizard Magick School" in the first sentence twice.
3.) Age?
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Are you still writing it ?
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One: I know that I am late, but I wanted to say that this is noting like Harry Potter beecause at da end when he is writing it says that tristan is not evil yet.
Two: I am writing a book 2 it is called" Calix Bone:The Specter Ring.
Three: If you want to know more about it just send me a message and ii will let u know give you a sneak peek what is going to be that series kalled and more just message me plz!!!?!?!?!?
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@chronaxdeaththekid Hey it's good to hear other aspiring authors here on Youtube. How is the story going? If you'd like to check out my superhero story I am working on, there is a reading over on my channel!
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@Meagan51422 The most important thing is to enjoy the writing and the story. Try making it interesting for you again? If you'd like to check out my superhero story I am working on, there is a reading over on my channel!
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@yunaqqqqq2 The main thing is to just enjoy writing the story and the characters, and don't worry too much about where it is going. Like I say, the main thing is have fun! If you'd like to check out my superhero story I am working on, there is a reading over on my channel!
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@briannarox1213 What I am trying is doing short 3-4 minute readings and posting them here on Youtube. Maybe you could try it too?
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@wetyou0 Commented :D
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@wetyou0 It's a shame you stopped. Never mind, maybe some day another story will take your interest. If you'd like to check out my superhero story I am working on, there is a reading over on my channel!
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wow, i am actually in the middle of writing a book called Emma:The Heart, one thing i would change about your story is to make the chapter alittle bit more detailed :D
singgg1118 3 years ago
Thanks for advice but i wasnt done with the chapter, just showing progress... and i stopped tho :( but good luck on yours :D
wetyou0 3 years ago
Comment please :D
wetyou0 3 years ago