This is the first song that I have written and is my original work.
Lyrics
Verse 1
I started off as a usual day
I took a walk to pray
I see a girl walking near me
covered in shame, covered in shame
Chorus
She stops and looks at me
As she fakes the smile on her face
She tries to hide her pain
All she needs is for someone to say
That she looks beautiful today
Verse 2
I begin to wonder why she feels this way
But does it matter anyway
She's hurting, looking for a way to handle all her pain
Is there something I can do to help her find a way
Chorus
Bridge
Who am I to judge her
Who am I to say
That she doesn't deserve the same
As me
Chorus 2
She stops and looks at me
With a smile on her face
She tries to hide her pain
All she needs is for someone to say
Chorus 3
She stops and looks at me
With a smile on her face
She's washed away her pain
All she needed was for me to say
All she needed was for me to say
That she looks beautiful today
Good voice , but learn to control ur voices and it would be awesome !
Ryztad 4 months ago
Dang boy. This is great. I really enjoyed this song... I do believe you're a talented musician, and a talented songwriter. It's difficult to write a good song that really means a lot to you and is also applicable to others. GREAT JOB!
I'm sure you're going places.
Keep it up.
MakeTheLeftChoice 5 months ago