That is damn good Blair. For starters, you have a lot going on in this song. There are certain stanzas where lyrically I would like to see them last 8 to 12 bars longer.(around minute 1:33 to 2:00) The reason is the first 4 bars creates the change in atmosphere; after those four is where the lyrics begin. When we get a little further along we can work it out. Sounds like a SAGA!!
I like this song. It has some parts that would sound great with a layer of distorted guitars. send me an mp3 of the song and I will add some guitars on top of it.
That is damn good Blair. For starters, you have a lot going on in this song. There are certain stanzas where lyrically I would like to see them last 8 to 12 bars longer.(around minute 1:33 to 2:00) The reason is the first 4 bars creates the change in atmosphere; after those four is where the lyrics begin. When we get a little further along we can work it out. Sounds like a SAGA!!
bruiser420 2 weeks ago
I like this song. It has some parts that would sound great with a layer of distorted guitars. send me an mp3 of the song and I will add some guitars on top of it.
Jamie
Valhom666 2 months ago