NBB 'Beautiful One' #9 -Goodbyes..-
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I dont like the end
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Was that what actully happened?
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wht ppl do for luv its crazy
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i loved the whole story!!!
but i think they didn't have to die.
it just should be a matter of life & death. and the surgery lasted for hours while nat cried and cried until he fell asleep. then they will carry nat home. but both of them will live.
&& i haven't thought of an ending... :D but it should be a happy ending.
-- but you did an excellent job!!!
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that was so lame u should try to stick to the actual story next time
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wow. it's like Romeo and Juliet. Really good.
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ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm okay??????????? that's not weird at all!!!!! um I say again???? it's different I'll give ya that
MyNBBStory 2 years ago
You can say it's weird if you want...
And yehh it is different.. I didn't wanna copy anybodys series soo I came up with me own..
RockChick1567 2 years ago
good idea!!!!!!!!!!! :D
MyNBBStory 2 years ago
Thanxs.. Haha..
xD
RockChick1567 2 years ago
wow thats sad but a good ending
SierraJ101 2 years ago
I know.. And thanks..
RockChick1567 2 years ago