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IELTS discussion essay writing (part 4 of 5)

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Part 4 of 5 on discussion essay writing

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  • thx

    

  • @randip67 yeah there are repetitions and redundancies that would score lower

  • you add nothing in first supporting paragraph. is that good enough to attract one extra band.even lots of repetition of idea and words.

  • SUPER HELFUL!!! :) Thanks a lot! :)

  • It's understandable why...

  • realy helpful

  • The last sentence of Support POV2 used "it is clear why" which was repeat of counterpart in Support POV1. Is there any other structure to replace "it is clear why..."? Any idea contribution would be appreciated. Thank you.

  • that's true..how?

  • Thanx for the vido, i have a question for you Rayn, how are you going to distingush between the 2 type of eassys? is it given in the exam? like discuss or agree or disagree? can u explain plz thanx

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