The Sleepwalker (short indie film)

Please put your comments so I can make better films.
"Last Dime Studios" "Short Independent film" "Cubase Studio 4.5" "Lee Gate" "Marilyn Mckenna" "Kyle Sunley" "Yazmine Barker" "Vegas 7.0" "Sony HDR SRe" "Sony ECM-HGZ1 Gun Zoom" "Flycam 3000 PRO"
A man is convinced that his wife is trying to kill him by making him sleepwalk to his death due to him keeping a £200,000 win to himself.

Category:

Film & Animation

Tags:

• Last Dime Studios
• Short Independent film
• Cubase Studio 4.5
• Lee Gate
• Marilyn Mckenna
• Kyle Sunley
• Vegas 7.0
• Sony HDR SRe
• Sony ECM-HGZ1 Gun Zoom
• Flycam 3000 PRO

[theadamlongstaff]

good stuff lads

[schumacher3344]

great but but next time a little bit more contrast in that movie:)

[95bradders95]

reall good, i reall enjoyed this, it was good for an independant film company, and im sure you will make better films in the future, some quesitons, were do oyu get oyur sound effects and music, as i am in the process of creating a war short film called The Elite, any tips and tricks for eidint gas i use sony vegas aswell, and if you have any questions about my films which i have allready made, please personal message me and ill tell you about my films, keep up the great work, cant wait more

[PimpsonofGod]

....I like the audio editing with the phone conversation. The way you added the phone line effect when switching camera perspectives. Excellent flashback scenes between 7:49-8:09. Overall for an indie video, I'll give you 3 1/2 stars in terms of professional critique. As a spectator I'll give you 4 stars. Keep at it and I promise you'll get a lot better. This was good epecially if it was your first one.

[PimpsonofGod]

It's a great concept. I like the idea. I got lost with the ending though. Did you and the wife have a fight while you were sleepwalking or did the daughter kill the two of you? The only reason I assume the daughter is because how nonchalant she took to the incident. Maybe she should have been left out of the last scene. Some the transitions could've been better too. The way it went from her closing the car door and the house door. I get what you were doing with that though......