So this is a song i wrote a while back and finally recorded it and yes there are a few mistakes but the lyrics are hear so read well you listen if you can the beat came from http://www.youtube.com/user/ZetaTiKappa so subb to him and if you don't mind sub to me to so COMMENT RATE SUBSCRIBE
Lyrics(slash=end of bar):
Verse 1:
no rapper 13 or 14 can step to me thats why i rep the b/-r-a-m-p-t-o-n you mess with me thats your end ima send/ you straight to hell hit your head with a bell/ no im joking stop the violence im rapping i demand silence/ or maybe you don't want to listen thats ok im not arrogant when im absent/ no one notices thats alright im just trying to find out were the ancient lotus is/ i was trying show y'all but you consider me small but its weird i cant recall/ last time you spit a bar maybe its because your head is vacant like a empty like a jar you threaten me but you live far/ and you woudnt be a gangster if we were/ face to face and you no thats closed case/ and don't get me wrong im as gangster as a c-e-o 5 or 6 more bars then the hooks got to go/ im like eagle eye not the girl or the guy/ the computer im always watching i see how you be mocking/ those you claim to admire ya your a liar because you desire/ the fame and the fortune but you should just improve on the skills thats what goin get you the kills/ in that battle see but you still wont be able to raddle me/
HOOK:
when i spit there are no survivors but still i ain't got but 14 subscribers and it seems that im sinking like divers/
when i spit there are no survivors but still i ain't got but 14 subscribers and it seems that im sinking like divers/
Verse 2:
what i got to do to show yall that im serious arnt you in the least bit curios as to how these rhymes get so Delirious/ thats easy i just incorporate the same techniques i use to get checkmate and im bout to get irate cuz most of yall just dead weight yet you claiming hip hops estate/ but such a claim is null and void cuz before you get to court you are destroyed/ i think you already know i speak of lyrics you should of known hip hop has ethics/ ya a code of conduct you never interrupt but you were raised in a business that was corrupt/ ok so you rappin hard but you fibbing so you receive no ribbon you trying to be a hero like FitzGibbon/ but you wont enter fort George so you hide in another country by a little gorge/ for every good MC theres like 10 bad ones but its the quality not the quantity in this industry theres mass immodesty/ but i can distinguish the real from the fake just like you could tell a fish from a stake/ still though it'd be easier if you were just you but you choose to be untrue/ nun the less im always real without a deal and ill never kneel/ to anyone like 300 i wont stop till this is done ya till this won/
HOOK:
when i spit there are no survivors but still i ain't got but 14 subscribers and it seems that im sinking like divers/
when i spit there are no survivors but still i ain't got but 14 subscribers and it seems that im sinking like divers/
Verse 3:
hes only 14 hes uneducated he enters the building and it is evacuated or at least all the haters have faded/ but the smart niggaz stay because they believe where theres a will theres a way he gets the bill but not a pay but hey/ thats reality this worlds full of brutality there is no such thing as immortality/ we all got to die and chances are most of us will be left in hell to fry and dont ask me why haven't you ever told a lie/ havnt you ever said lords name in vain or a in an extreme moment of pain/ im sorry i didnt mean for this ryme to be religious lets just try to make this indigenous / he trys to run from his destiny but he can never be free so he can run for all eternity/ or he can embrace take it at his own pace and never waste/ a moment and dont take as a simple placement/ if its fate you will know it everything else you can simply omit/
HOOK:
when i spit there are no survivors but still i ain't got but 14 subscribers and it seems that im sinking like divers/
when i spit there are no survivors but still i ain't got but 14 subscribers and it seems that im sinking like divers/
I PLAN TO RE DO IT SO BARE WITH THIS FOR NOW
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is this a joke? sounds like your just talking like a rambling nut case...no offence
olympussound 2 years ago
no its not a joke im going to re-do it so that its more clear at what im saying but i appreciate your honesty
jemar200 2 years ago
pretty sick BTW the ancient lotus is inside you
Rohan4basu 2 years ago
lol good to see someones listening closely to the lyrics
jemar200 2 years ago
yo ive listened to it, in my opinion you gotta slow it down like twice as much or even 3
re-record it a lot slower i guarantee it will come out a lot better
905NOBODY 2 years ago
yo is all of it to fast or certain parts? and any comment on the lyrics
jemar200 2 years ago