Frozen Spirit

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Uploaded by on Nov 9, 2008

An English Poem. ^_^ Hope you like, made it in the style of Emilie Autumn with the echoes and stuff. Thank you farlsno for the program! :P

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  • It can be read in whatever style you wish, the fact remains that its an emotionless piece of reading. I'm not just saying this to be rude, more as constructive criticism.

    Your pronunciation of words renders some almost indecipherable, that's something you need to think about. I don't care if its meant to be in the style of some famous woman, but it has no sign of emotion. Not only that, but the poem you've chosen, or written or whatever reeks of pretension. Choose something better written.

  • Isn't the lack of emotion an emotion - the inability to connect with the listener is something I wanted to portray. The spirit is frozen - they are lost, they have no feeling anymore. They are cold.

    Pretension, always pretension. It is always a disguise, always a sprout, a growth from the writer.

    I shall do soon.

  • Your voice isn't suited to reading poetry, and the echoes just distract from the poem itself. Also your style of reading lacks any sort of emotion, it sounds like a computer program. maybe reading poetry isn't for you.

  • Tom, I think that was the effect I was going for. I'm sorry that you don't like it much. But I enjoy it. =)

    It was meant to be a computer program. I added the shadows in. It was meant to be in an Emilie Autumn style.

    So instead of reading poetry not being for me, maybe it is just my style doesn't suit you. =)

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  • I like....a lot :P

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