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Smile & Wave
1st VERSE
I don't know why I was born to let it go,
I know that its not right but you see I dont care though,
Dont look twice, are you dead or alive,
This ship slowly sinks one day at a time so slow:
(Chorus)
No I dont care though: (Repeat)
2nd VERSE
Black or is it white, these colors that define you,
In this grey & empty room with these walls that confine you,
Stop & wait a minute don't you look down,
The suffering will stop when you finally hit the ground:
(Chorus)
No I dont care though: (Repeat)
3nd VERSE
Thousand miles high what does it feel like,
Is it what you thought or just the same lie,
Another blank page, no ink, nothing to say,
Just an empty room where you waist your days away:
(Chorus)
No I don't care though: (Repeat)
(Break)
I'm walking through this dark alone, theres no one here to see me down,
There no one here that gives a shit, on where Ill fall or when Ill hit the ground, Im picking up my face today, to look around & Smile & Wave:
My train is leaving out tonight, where Ill go my fate will decide,
Will I even live or die, I leave these lyrics for you to read behind,
So I'm picking up my face today to look around & Smile & Wave, to look around & Smile & Wave:
No...No I don't care though:
(Repeat) 3nd VERSE
Thousand miles high what does it feel like,
Is it what you thought or just the same lie,
Another blank page, no ink, nothing to say,
Just an empty room where you waist your days away:
(Chorus)
No I don't care though
Very Shinedown-ish! Decent groove, Man!
I would have ended after the "break" though, because... verse 3 is by far your strongest lyric and it would have [I feel] left the listeners wanting more. But, all-in-all... Tight stuff!!!!
I'm honored to be a small part of your group!
songsbyjason 2 years ago
Wow!! Shinedown-ish....Awesome man, Thanks! Thanks for listening & commenting. I appreciate it.
jrkraze 2 years ago
I like it! Cool stuff!
Rick
bios36 2 years ago
Thanks Rick!
jrkraze 2 years ago
Nice to see you back! Rock on!
booya62056 2 years ago
Good to be back! Thanks for listening & commenting.
jrkraze 2 years ago