I kissed a boy once monologue.
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CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM: You didn't portray the character of a shy girl with learning disabilities. The way you read the lines and then said them was distracting as well. Needs more emotional emphasis but if it were as you said a "socially awkward" young woman then i can see where that would work. Also, the volume needs to increase. Sorry for the criticism, don't mean it in a bad way. =)
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you need to play the character with a disabilty and make sure you seem thick . it was rubbish tbh.
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@macypia I ws a DJ at college. I've also worked as a volunteer drama tutor, so iv kinda got a thing about expressive voices. Sorryxx
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I think it was pretty good. Most people play this part all wrong, and don't factor in that the character is shy. I think you nailed it compared to everyone else on youtube.
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i just did this monologue on my channel!! i think you're GREAT and i love your interpretation of juniper :D this is really great, you've got some true talent!!
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nice job!
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good job! it'd be aaaaamaaazingg if you could watch my version :D
pleease and thankyou! :D
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@KimberlyKatastrophes please check out mine...i did mine as a girl with a learning disability
Well done, beautiful understated acting. You should work in radio- your voice is so expressive!
MsJadeHamilton 9 months ago
@MsJadeHamilton Thanks! I'm actually going to college for acting! but, my dad is in radio.. :D
macypia 9 months ago
sorryyy.....just a little constructive critisism!!!
...it was kinda boringggg! use more inflection and facial expressions. =]
xobrix3 2 years ago 2
No, thank you so much for letting me know. :) I'll take that in. I appriciate it. :))
macypia 2 years ago
the face expression of yours a great but the only think I have to say is that it looked like you reading and then sayingg you line and that made the poses to long.Please watch my monologue and let me know what you think thanks:)
DeborahEmily 2 years ago
thanks so much for the feedback, and yeah, haha, i was reading it. lol
macypia 2 years ago