great job... keep putting those emotions out there in poetry instead of in the streets where it can turn to gossip... i love ( no pain no gain; what doesn't kill you only makes you stronger; and trouble don't last always)
U go girl!! I'm feeling like that everyday... u know being in love with someone who's not in love with u, and u wait for that phone's face to light up and it's body to do a little dance and it's voice to sing beyonce - new shoes (my ringtone) lol, yes honey, and then when it does, it's not them, it's someone u didnt hear from in like a year, but u dont care, you dont wanna talk anyway cause u want "him/her" to call and say "thinking of you" or "sorry, i love you" sigh...
I know exactly what that feeeels like! lol.. Love the piece..it was HOT!!!
LYRIKALTOMBOI 2 years ago
great job... keep putting those emotions out there in poetry instead of in the streets where it can turn to gossip... i love ( no pain no gain; what doesn't kill you only makes you stronger; and trouble don't last always)
datNova57 2 years ago
Great Job!
Xp3erynce 2 years ago
...i totally luv it... :)
it's all so true!
SUPERAMERICANBLONDE 2 years ago
U go girl!! I'm feeling like that everyday... u know being in love with someone who's not in love with u, and u wait for that phone's face to light up and it's body to do a little dance and it's voice to sing beyonce - new shoes (my ringtone) lol, yes honey, and then when it does, it's not them, it's someone u didnt hear from in like a year, but u dont care, you dont wanna talk anyway cause u want "him/her" to call and say "thinking of you" or "sorry, i love you" sigh...
Brinal1 2 years ago