El drops the phone she is frozen on the spot has she feels the prang of somthing cold and sharp near her back
?????: Be quite or I will stabb you
The man draggs El in to the main room where some one else has already got Rece and is starting to tie him up
????: Grass our mate up will you
El: (crying) I don't know what you are on about
?????: I think you do
Eden gets out of the car and walks slowly up to the house he opens the door and walks in
Eden: El Rece
El: NO Ed ( the man covers her mouth)
????: Get him
Eden walks round the corner as a man grabbs him dragging him in to the room as well
?????: You will do as your told otherwise you will all be killed you got it
Rece: what do you want us to do?
?????: I want you to get up very slowly and walk with us but if you try and scream then that is it
????: Get up ( kicking El and Eden )
El: Rece ( rushing to him)
Rece: its going to be ok El
???: Shut up
they lead El Rece and Eden in to the back of a white transit van.
Eden: Where are you taking us?
???????: Shut up!
???: did you mange to get much
????: Not much but I did get this ( showing a gold Rolex watch)
El: Hey thats my Dads
?????: Not any more it aint sweet heart
What the men didnt relise is that El only dropped her phone it didnt cancel her 999 call the police are on the way to have a look
officer Ted: this is where we tracked the 999 call from sir
Officer Mark: Ok lets take a look
Ted: Looks like a break in sir
back with the others
Eden is panking his breathing has become laboured he has starting going a gryish colour El and Rece sees this they start to worry
Rece: Hey Eden mate look at us its going to be ok yeah
El: Yeah its going to be fine
??????: What have I told you shut up!
Rece: Please he isnt well let him go he has nothing to do with this honest
???: Ha you must think we are stupid he must think we are stupid Pete let him go so he can go and tell the police no chance
Eden turns to one side and is sick all down the man who is holding them in the back
???: Why you little ( starts laying in to him)
Rece: get of him
El: leave him alone
Pete: Calm down Paul ok calm down
???: knew we shoulden't of put hot head in the back *laughing*
Pete:You can shut up and all Gary * hitting him round the head*
Gary: Owww
the van stops they hear the men getting out the front they hear them moving towords the back of the van as soon as the doors are open El Rece and Eden try and make a run for it The men chase after them Eden Collaspes to the floor El is caught then Rece
Pete: that was a very stupid move children
One by one the men pull there heads back and dragg them in to what looks like an old lock up
Paul: In there ( throwing Eden down on to the floor
El and Rece are also thrown down on the floor
the men head of to leave
Rece: What are you going to do to us
Gary: LEt you sweat a bit
The men shut the lock up and head of
Rece: You two alright
El: Yeah ( shufferling towords him)
Eden: Yeah *gasping*
El: Ed Its going to be ok listen to me its going to be ok
Rece tries to slip his hands out of the rope wrapped around them he does with that he Move to El undose hers then Edens
El: ( screaming) Help can any one hears us Help!
Rece: *kneeling down in front of Eden* Hey are you ok mate sit up *Helping him up*
El: there has got to be away out of here * feeling her away around the walls as its dark* whats this * she flicks a switch witch turns on the lights *
Rece: No windows the only way out is through that
El: Eden do you have your phone?
Eden shakes his head
El: Damn it
Rece: here mate your frezzing *taking of his zipped hoody and putting it around him* are you ok El
Eden: thanks
El: What are we going to do Rece ( crying)
Rece: some one will find us or we will get out
El: How
Rece: I don't know there has to be some way to open this place * walking over to the garge door looking door*
Rece trys to open the door he tries kicking the door but he cant budge it
Rece: Nope But don't worry did you ring the police?
El: No i dropped the phone
Rece: But you didn't end the call
El: No do you think
Rece: Maybe they will trace the call any ways
They have been in the lock up for 5 hours Eden is becomeing progressivily worse El and Rece are both worried about him
Rece: Eden can you hear me? He is proper cold babe
El: there must be somthing in hear we can use to keep him warm *seeing a dust cover and getting it* here put this round him
He does
back with the police
Ted: Is that Mr Giz?....... Well I am officer Ted I am ringing to say it appears your house has been broken in too..... Your Daughter no sir.......... Ok Ok don't worry sir we will go round and see....
Mark: What is it?
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