Almost Heaven (I won't fight it)

This is a song I wrote recently. Let me know what you guys think. Enjoy it lol I like it. The song is in regular tuning with a partial capo on the 2nd fret covering all the strings but the top two.

LYRICS::::::::
V1: Goodbye Mountains and open spaces.
Old friends and older faces.
I pack my bags, turn the key, and hit the gas.
I make my way to the land of the beaches.
Drive past the old south and Georgia peaches
Another memory for every road I pass.

V2: I kiss both of my grandmothers
My parents and my brother
They are the ones I will miss the most
Like sand time slips right through my hands
Blown away before I get a chance to land
One minute I'm here the next I'm on the coast.

PC1: If home is really where the heart is
Did I just leave it there?
And is the grass really greener over here,
It looked that way I swear

PC2: If this is such a small, small world
How could I feel alone?
I guess I'm not in Kansas anymore
And I'm a long, long way from home

CHORUS: I'm leaving almost Heaven in West Virginia,
for miles and miles of 95.
This old world keeps turning,
As I make my journey
But I won't fight it,
I'll just hop in ... and ride

BRIDGE: And I will ride until I find my place
Wherever it may be
Yet when I get to this new place
I find the steps that I retrace
Have led me to the place I started in.

Category:

Music

Tags:

• Guitar
• Almost
• Heaven
• West
• Virginia
• Songwriter
• Singing
• Music

[stonestreet]

your talent has grown and seasoned quite well. keep up the good writing from the heart...thumbs up!

[Philbow55]

@stonestreet You should check out professional performance and writing site. Google us at DreamSongMusic! Thanks :-)

[grangiecdxv6]

Very nice, just stumbled across you, talented dude!!

[Philbow55]

@grangiecdxv6 You should check out professional performance and writing site. Google us at DreamSongMusic! Thanks :-)

[brooklyn227]

Well done. I love songs like this. They sound great as an acoustic, but have so much potential to be an amazing electric song.

I want to hear you multi-track this song and ad some violin.

[Philbow55]

@brooklyn227 You should check out professional performance and writing site. Google us at DreamSongMusic! Thanks :-)

[firefighterwelldone]

This is amazing! :) I look forward to hearing more from you in the future...you have an INCREDIBLE gift!

[glpcustom123]

wow u dont understand how much i like this song more than other famous peopes songs....its wonderful i cant stop pressing the replay button! :D i love it

[brendanj0314]

Have you put up the tab or the chords yet?

Bren

[1993kaylee]

very nice and i love the harmonics! great lyrics!

[ahall4039]

oh thx...

[brooklyn227]

Pre-Chorus # 1