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This is my original (Imii), which i did at some point last week.. however my voice wasn't really at its best because i was and still am suffering from a bad throat (n) but i wanted to get it up here to get some feedback :) the low bit before the chorus is meant to be rapping.. but the timing has been really difficult recently because of exams etc.. so i haven't had the chance, so it sounds a bit weird - but its a work in progress (y) :) this ones only got me in it, because i just wanted to get some feedback on one of my own originals and to see what you think :) anyways... i hope you enjoy :) please comment, rate and subscribe xx
I'm also aware that the piano is quite loud..=/ i tried to change it, but it didn't work.. (n) but thankyou for the feedback :) we won't really be using much piano in the future (i'm not great at it - i just play it to back my vocals)
Lyrics :) they don't all make alot of sense but ohwell =')
False accusations, there's no limitations
There's no going back.
You get what you get, no don't dwell and regret
The things in your past.
I don't know any way, any way
To change this.
But we're in denial, it's time to face
The truth..
Every time that I try I, I just fall back
Fall back 20 yards from the kick start.
Another days passed, turns to ashes,
Another tear falls from those lashes..
However much I try to hide,
Hide the heart that's crumbling deep inside.
I may trip, I may fall,
But nothings gonna stop me taking what the future holds..
Another day goes by,
Another day arises,
Makes it hard to find what I have lost.
Chasing memories,
Won't help you to breathe,
Though I guess we'll see,
Which way to go, ohhh..
What do you get when you just stand and forget,
Oh what do you do?
What do you look for when you look in the mirror,
Is it you?
Every time, I forget, I forget another day
But what is the use if you just refuse,
And just turn away..
Every time that I try I, I just fall back
Fall back 20 yards from the kick start.
Another days passed, turns to ashes,
Another tear falls from those lashes..
However much I try to hide,
Hide the heart that's crumbling deep inside.
I may trip, I may fall,
But nothings gonna stop me taking what the future holds..
Another day goes by,
Another day arises,
Makes it hard to find what I have lost..
Chasing memories,
Won't help you to breathe,
Though I guess we'll see
Which way to go, ohhh..
However much I try
Just to say goodbye..
Cos it seems to me we ain't meant to be..
Every time I try to go and reach the door..
You have me coming back for more
Chasing memories,
Won't help you to breathe,
Though I guess we'll see
Which way to go, ohhh..
This song is amazing honestly, i wish i could get this on my ipod some how.
27777777777 1 year ago 31
great song! love it sooo much!!! REPEAT...
Deman300180 1 year ago 12