I Would Be Free, Short Story Excerpt

http://mattgannonaspiringwriter.blogspot.com/

This is the beginning of a short story I wrote called "I Would Be Free". It's about a boy who is a slave to his fear, and it consumes him. It's about a boys struggle to take his life back.

The image is from Google images, and the music is "The Surface of the Sun" by John Murphy.

http://www.facebook.com/pages/Matt-Gannon-Aspiring-Writer/101690996535725?ref=mf

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[malteseheart]

Beautiful! Do you have a book of your work?

[gannonthepro]

@malteseheart Thanks very much. I don't but I definitely have thought of it. My main concern is getting my prose published though. Perhaps someday if I write more poetry, I will have them made into a book.

[HkRoxie]

wow this is awesome i love it so much detail it makes it so intrestring its amazing

[gannonthepro]

@HkRoxie Thank you :)

[KevinGoesAcoustic]

this is nice man

[gannonthepro]

@KevinGoesAcoustic  Thank you. Much appreciated

[beanoh27]

"Trees are poems the earth write upon the sky, we tear them down and turn them into paper so we may record our emptyness" Great poem man, I listen to it alot.

[cepomwa]

I'm not a usual english speaker, and I'd say you speak too fast for me, why don't you put the text in the description so that we can read it at the same time.

[Sonic88FF]

Amazing! beautiful message...

[VildmarkBushcraft]

great vid. 5/5 larger then life.

[SMALE15]

cooool