Gone Evermore (2010) - New Version: Uncompleted Film
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It's so random! The girl goes from saying, "I'm sorry," to calling the other girl a bitch! I thought it was a best friend fight, but the mom just left? I was really confused. But, I loved it ethier way! I wish it was finished because it would be awesome! Good job, but you might want to make it make a little more sense...? Other than that, awesome. :)
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@IbeJigsaw - relax. it's a student film, there's no need to be so harsh and pick out every little technical detail. one can only learn by making more films. and really, i thought a lot of the shots were nice, i liked the b+w style, and who gives a shit about pacing at this stage? there was good continuity in the cuts (which is extremeeelly important). the only problems i had with it were at the very end when the audio dips, and some confusing dialogue/story progression. minor, fixable issues.
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i've never seen a short film so bad..EVER
i love how you tried all of these cliche artistic shots which actually had no meaning whatsoever.
"hey maybe it'll look cool if we fill half the frame with a tree"
you held alllll of your shots for 3-5 seconds longer than they should have been. and why the hell was this black and white?
really, from a filmmaking perspective, this was absolutely brutal. and the story didn't go anywhere either. it was more like a scene from a film rather than a short
what dude, you dont even have any videos!
how can you even say anything bad even if this film was terrible
BROKENHOUSEFILMS 2 years ago 4
I seen this before, and yet i like it alot! only thing i thought maybe that could have been fixed were some shots that could have been 1-2 seconds shorter. Other than that i still give this video a 5!
triadmanager91 2 years ago 4