Nathan Dark HD Remake Short Story Part 1.

Hey guys it's been a while since i've done anything with Nathan Dark so here is a remake story in HD with some tweeks here & there a thew changes to the story & completely with all new scenes & music.

I am working really hard on the glitches that you may notice & will release a better version at a later date hope you enjoy it.

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• listeruk
• j3pfilms
• j3pvlogs
• young
• damon
• dark
• straker2
• oldschool1981uk

[The141Productions]

Quality is better. But you need more shots. I counted 3 in the first 2 mins 15 seconds. I then counted how many shots were in the same time in Overrun. There were 39. Makes a huge difference. Show the audience more things. Good though

[LISTERUK]

@The141Productions cheers for the honest comment bro really appreciate it as you can see quite a narrow passage way lol will do better next time quite hard to set the camera up for new angles might have to rig something up but cheers for watching : )

[cpuwrite]

Have you explained the discrepancies between Nathan and Daemon? The different speech patterns? The way Nathan needs a wrist communicator to talk with TDC but Daemon does not?

Don't tell Ade I wrote this ;), but I like your music, sound affects and segways better than his. The transport sequence was better than Ade's "wormhole opens Daemon pops in." You should pat yourself on the back for it.

[straker2]

@Oldschool1981uk Yeah, I liked the Vincent gag, made me LOL! :)) I think you've done a seriously great job upping the level of this one, Man, and I'd love to see what you could do with some of the others or even some new ones. Keep improving and keep growing! Remember the old Chinese saying, "no best, just bettter". Keep getting better! I liked this ep a lot! :)))

[Oldschool1981uk]

@straker2 Hey ade thanks for the kind words really wanted to get back into nathan dark this was a remake of the very 1st one i done which had your cupcake gag in it but this time around i wanted to make it a bit more serious so i took that out but left one gag in about vincent kosmos lol.

As for the costume that coat was the original one i wore from the first one wanted to see if anyone noticed lol.

[straker2]

This is a huge step forward. But...when you watch a film you've made, consider things like "is the sound okay or do I need to make it better?" "Is that the best camera angle or would be more effective if I shot it differently?" "Is this the best lighting, what if I shot at night with light and shadow?" Ïs this scene best indoors? Could I shoot outside and make it more interesting?" Ïs that the best costume? The best color?" Etc. Questions help you improve your work. Ade