Sorry its been a while but Im not getting many comments and I have a life and school which makes things hard but comments motivate me to write so here is what I have tell me what you think
OMG I just hit 1000 views on Extra-Ordinary 1 thats so freaking amazing :]
Nate: Drake tipped me off
Blake: dumb-
Nate: Blake
*back with joe*
[As soon as Joe walked back into the party he was surrounded by his friends]
Sarah: just show up Joe
Guy: yeah
Ashley: Hey Joe you wanna dance
Joe: nahh I think I'm going to get a drink
[Joe walks over to where the drinks are when he gets there Sally is there frantically looking for something or someone with Jake]
Sally: JOE have you seen Blake I cant find here anywhere
Joe: oh she left with her brother
Sally: WHAT!!!
Joe: yeah he showed up and she just disappeared
Sally: come on Jake lets go find Nick and go to her house
Jake: sure
[As Sally and Jake walked away a girl ran up to joe from behind and engulfed him in a hug]
???: joeypoo
Joe: Alison
Ali: yes
[Alison turns Joe around and Kisses him]
Joe: I though you and your parents were staying in New York this weekend
Ali: we were but I said I couldnt spend another day away from my Joe so I hopped into my first class seat and flew back home to my boyfriend
*BLAKE*
(Uhg I cant believe my brother why does his stardom have to ruin everything!!!)
Mom: BLAKE could you please come down here
Blake: COMING
Mom: well Blake someone called for you today
Blake: oh who, did they leave a message?
Mom: Um no but here is their phone number [Hands Blake a post it]
Blake: Who was it
Mom: ermmm
Blake: [looks down at the post it next to the number it said James with a line through it and right above
it, it said Dad]
Blake: WHAT
(Thoughts started racing through my head, why had he called and why had my mom told me, she had
tried to keep us apart for so long. My dad and I had communicated twice before in secret through letters but it wasnt much since my mom kicked him out, but I wont go into that. With that I headed back up to my room and stuck the post it on my desk near my computer. Today was way to confusing, as I was sitting listening to some music my cell went off.)
Blake: Hello???
???????COMMENT PLEASE??????????
love it!! haha i can't wait!
Valleygal729 2 years ago
thanks I just posted
minorityofone1984 2 years ago
oooh can't wait for the next chapter :)
JBFanTrish07 2 years ago
thanks hopefully I will have it out soon
minorityofone1984 2 years ago
Is it Joe? Yeah its Joe. Is it? Yeah.
Haha sorry just had a little mental battle with myself there.
parkety777 2 years ago
haha what ever floats your boat
minorityofone1984 2 years ago