K basically i redid it now like a year later and here is ur lyrics =D:
t's not so much the pain
It's more the actual knife
Pretending, the picture is perfect
I cut myself to sleep
I close my eyes for a second
And meet a fragile soul
I scream to hide that I'm lonely
The echo calls my name
If I ever...If I never...
Make me understand the thought whatever
Make me see...Make me be...
Make me understand you're there for me
Take this life
I'm right here
Stay a while and breathe me in
Take this life
I'm right here
Stay a while and breathe me in
The water drops just beg to hit me
Why now? Haven't rained for days
No time to play hide and seek
I call upon you to take me on
Break me down to pieces
Put me back, do it right this time
Struggling to fill this empty shell
Burn my efforts in the end it means(Nothing)
If I ever...If I never...
Make me understand the thought whatever
Make me see...Make me be...
Make me understand you're there for me
Take this life
I'm right here
Stay a while and breathe me in
Take this life
I'm right here
Stay a while and breathe me in
These thoughts...burn a hole in my heart
These thoughts...will keep me feeling
These thoughts...burn a hole in my heart
These thoughts...will keep me feeling
EEY nice vocals! you can download my cover and do vocals over it!
Would be awesome!
OndskapensHersker 2 years ago
lol ya wen i get my own comp bak maybe ill do it sometime
chidster64 2 years ago
sounds like a rat dying haha na im just kidding, your voice can do some good in some badass metal band but not over take this life
crunkmanpimp 2 years ago
lol ive got a wider range now so i can do it the right way now so im thinkin of doin another redo lolz
chidster64 2 years ago
nice job. but scream more, dont growl like that.
Ifrit0s 3 years ago
i think u forgot to read the title lol besides i couldnt scream b4 but im workin on it now
chidster64 2 years ago