"WITH THE HOPE THAT IT INSPIRES ATLEAST ONE SOUL"
Hello there, wrote a poem 3 years bac. At a time when I had difficulties in life...when I was tearing between two roads...one that led to my dream and one which led to no where...
I want hungry dream chasers reading this right now to realise one thing- Live up your dream no matter what! Its worth it, trust me! You have only one life that you'll live as Tom, Joseph, Kim, Jane whatever your name may be...just one this chance...n if your dream's not a destructive one, go for it! is all I can say.Remember, "When the going gets tough, the tough get going..."
Here's the poem. It sounds lil silly to me ryt now, coz I wrote this 3yrs bac...however,if at all it does motivate anyone,even if it is just 1 lil child out of a whooping 6.2 billion people, I'll be glad to take the risk of putting it up here, on youtube. Coz you know, "some may laugh, so wat?...many will follow..."
[1]
I hold a dream within my eyes
I want to win, I want to rise
But for now, I am blinded from a day
Clouds and nights have blocked my way
[2]
I'm perplexed will I ever get there?
I'll toil and sweat, but is it there?
There's a heap full of hope, I'll try to conquer
Though it is way too high
[3]
I know beyond the eclipse, a sun still shines
Beyond the dark clouds, moonlight hides
You'll see after a side night, a day has risen
A sea has a tide, but sure there's a horizon
[4]
Be it a drop of blood, a tear or sweat
On this lonely road that I shed
Makes me stronger-My life it makes
I'll turn and look at this lonely way
Hoping to see them as (lala) flowers someday
But is it there? That someday?
[5]
But still that wind of passion loves to blow
Colorless drops of rain, do make a rainbow
My dream glows out there, beyond that door
A sea has a tide, but sure there's a shore
[6]
You ought to leave the ground, if you wish to fly (lalala)
Leave the world I was in all this time
I want to see my dream, I wanna see my dream
Rise..and gleam..Someday....
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The meaning of the poem: Stanza [4] The sacrifices and people we hurt in order to get to our dream...it defintely is sad, but it should all turn out for the better someday...
Stanza [6] The first step to success is, to break free from your rigid environment..you really need to do that. Pleasing everyone doesn't budge you an inch further in life. Break the rules that chain you up, express yourself the way you want to and fly high "now"...soar...you guys are born to excel. As long as your dreams aren't negative.
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And so in a nutshell, "Many of life's failures are people who did not realize how close they were to success when they gave up"
Don't give up dudes...eva...
NOTE:The tune is derived from mixing 2 Korean songs. (1) Don't Blame Him by Wax and (2) 127 Days After Love by Kangta & Vaness.
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Hold your notes longer and dont go down at i am and get your ass on britans got talent but make sure u hold notes better or it dosnt sound right but really good job if you also wrote this song then good job its brilliant get back to me thanks keep it up :D (just need a little bit of work and you could be gotten a record deal)
LCKLooney 9 months ago 2
@LCKLooney Oh my God! That was a breathtaking comment :) thanks though! However,I feel I have a long way to go, to get signed on a record deal..looking back at this video which is two years old,I feel it has A LOT! of flaws and am waiting to join a music class desperately.. Thank you so much and All the Very Best! for your mission on BGT
arirang1991korea 9 months ago
Hey I wrote a poem and composed a small song with it, check it out please its the my first think on youtube!
PhilolsopherKing 9 months ago
@PhilolsopherKing Oh sure,I will...Thanks for stopping by :)
arirang1991korea 9 months ago
=O
breath-taking....
SingingGurl128 11 months ago 2
@SingingGurl128 Thanks for the comment! :) All the very best!
arirang1991korea 9 months ago