Fire (original) on guitar

hey guys, here's a little thing I wrote, hope you enjoy. Feel free to give some feedback, or not, whatever floats your sailboat xx

Lyrics:

Verse 1:
I look at you like you put the sun in the sky
and I look at you like you're the reason time goes by
and I treat you like a king on his throne
well how could I have known

Verse 2:
And I've been thinking too hard
about where to start
but everytime I do, all the thoughts lead back to you
oh what to do

Chorus:
And my mama said don't play with fire
well I did more than that, yeah I danced in it to my desire
oh I didn't think that I could feel higher, and I was right
because I fell right down from that big old height

Verse 3:
And the flames lit the way
down a dark old path which led me astray
and I was bound by all the words which I couldn't say

Verse 4:
And the pain sunk inside
rushed through my blood and in my bones, oh I couldn't hide
and all I could think was, well I tried, I tried

Chorus

Verse 5:
and now I'm losing sleep
caught up on, what I can't keep
and intertwined in my dreams are all these faces all these scenes
of what could've been

Chorus

Outro:
And I look at you like you put the sun in the sky
and I look at like you're the reason it shines so bright
and I treat you like a king on his throne
well how could I have known

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[nixon17]

There is some background noise. Don't know if it is the quality of the microphone or an airconditing system but it's annoying. But great music. 

[100papermagic]

@nixon17 yeah it's just a bad quality camera. I can't afford a new better one :/

[delz1104]

^_^

[100papermagic]

@delz1104 ily adele <3

[carolinabooboo]

it"s great !!

[100papermagic]

@carolinabooboo thanks! that means a lot!

[CheatSlav]

congrats, really good!

[delz1104]

Sorta just watched it again. Still love -3

[thegungaguy]

awesome song thumbs up i subscribed

[CrossingGo]

Clicked on this vid just for the heck of it...WOW! You have an incredible voice and beautiful tone. But on top of that, definite songwriting skills too which is much more rare. I hope you decide to make a living out of music....people would crowd into cafes and clubs to hear you!

[love2score54]

i really liked this great lyrics! , and I'm subscribing :) keep writing songs!

[100papermagic]

@gwenthegeek thank youuu :)