Grace, Queen Of My Heart (Demo)
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to long for radio play kinda nice melody not the strongest verse to hook but your style is current and that;s inportant in today's music needs a tweek here and apull there but over all your doing good man keep crafting your skills you could put out a one hit in time ..best of luck
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@upcomingsongs I realize the point you were trying to make, its just that the metaphor is weak. Its reads too much like a literal statement. And when you analyze it, it doesn't make sense. "The picture on that card looked just like her face". There is no picture on a ace. How about "The best card you can pull, but all I saw was her face" Then it becomes a metaphor. The high of gambling juxtaposed against the low of losing your one and only.
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Sounds good!! A lot like brad paisley!!! Good job! Keep it up!
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@ShadowDAce1 lol
<333 awesoem
Tortio875 1 week ago in playlist Fav Songs
@Tortio875 Thank you for the comment :)
~Songwriter Kevin~
upcomingsongs 1 week ago
Maybe I am playing with different cards than everyone else but I have never seen an ace that was a face card?
timbov123 2 weeks ago
@timbov123 The point of the card were he saw her face, is because thats when he realizes that he made a mistake for gambiling and cheating on his wife, and realizes that she is the only girl in his heart.
upcomingsongs 2 weeks ago
This is such a good song!!!!!
SaltsprayRoses 4 weeks ago
@SaltsprayRoses Thanks for your comment :)
upcomingsongs 4 weeks ago