YouTube Poetry Challenge

Hey everyone! Indulge your poetic side and create a poem of 500 characters or less (including title) and add it to the comment section on this video.

Even if you don't add a poem, go to the bottom of the screen and click on "view all comments". Then, go through other people's poems and rate'em!

Thumbs up! = I loved it!
No rating = it was okay
Thumbs down!= worse than a Vogon's

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[Mousanation]

Space Space Its infinite horizons are familiar to us. We long to float in the womb of our true mother. Space We take baby steps. The weight of our master's load on our back. We try and try to escape. Only to be plucked down like a fig from its mother tree. Space My 100 years might remain in the hands of earth, but my atoms will always be with my mother. Space. When this cruel master is consumed by its own maker i will be with you once more. I long for the eternal blackness.

[imrational]

Mousanation,

I really liked that one!

[evanterwilliger]

i once was a kite...

now i'm a hat for a tree

[imrational]

evanterwilliger!

I'm sorry!!!! I went to click on thumbs up, but my finger slipped and it hit thumbs down... that was not intentional! Sorry

[ikkuj]

I've been trying to teach evolution

To some Christians with their delusions

But I still haven't found the solution

To fight their mental pollution

[Hammer14206]

so its time that i face my troubles sick of the pyschosis and a slave to the hypnosis of drugs is no fun all you wanna do is run from your existance far away like a bird flying into the distance numb out the pain but once the highs done gotta do it again then again it gets old and repetive im weary of leaving wreckages in my wake so i think its about time i hit the brakes

[Hammer14206]

so who am i what is my purpose is there a reason i just blow through the seasons without meaning am i just waiting for the sun to go down and the moon to up

living each day like i dont give fuck alawys just trying to make a quick buck well im tired contomplating the events that just transpired

im sick of living in a bubble

[5amGordon]

Okay okay i thought of one.

-Comic Relief-

Sadism is my black eye.

Jokes are my sunglasses.

[Danceinsilence]

Thoughts Of A Painting

Stormy seas seized ships,

bombarding, bouncing, badgering,

fear follows forthright,

holding, heaving, hearing,

mighty meets mercy,

drink deep, down, down, down.

From Within A Soul - 2010

[luna132507]

The Game

Day One

i say to her I like you, she says I like you too, yay happy

Day Two

i smile at her, boooooo she ignores me

Day Three

i don't know what to think, now she's back to day one

Day Four

she's repeating steps 1, 2 and three

i would continue but im tired of playing, from now on play russian roulette by yourself

[azerberjankey]

Divorce

Ebony whisper my sets ablaze.

A love now lies bleeding, who now takes the blame?

Delicate lily sits silent in hush,

I hold her so tightly and try not to crush.

My bed is on fire, my head all a rage

this marriage is dying while trapped in a cage.

[classicchinadoll]

continued from last comment

The truth will keep you far from sin

your every step he does ordain

be blessed in life and blessed in death

count your losses as his gain